Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Seductive Shelley Shores"A collection of poetry.
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Comment from Ls
There can be only one thing that a reviewer, or commenter, could say in response to the tongue twisting poetical effort: "Huh . . ."
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There can be only one thing that a reviewer, or commenter, could say in response to the tongue twisting poetical effort: "Huh . . ."
Comment Written 12-May-2005
Comment from Diny
I always wiondered if this had any more to it, And I am sure the original did, but I could never get past the first line
Would be a pain to recite that's for sure
But it definantly took creativitism( is that a word?)
to write this one, buddy
Write on
fune read
Diny
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I always wiondered if this had any more to it, And I am sure the original did, but I could never get past the first line
Would be a pain to recite that's for sure
But it definantly took creativitism( is that a word?)
to write this one, buddy
Write on
fune read
Diny
Comment Written 12-May-2005
Comment from Chelsea Nolen
Delightful! I laughed my head off! This was very funny, I especially like the 'smack the schmuck who had the luck' line.
It was a tongue-twister to read aloud, but it is even better when that way.
Congratulations!
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Delightful! I laughed my head off! This was very funny, I especially like the 'smack the schmuck who had the luck' line.
It was a tongue-twister to read aloud, but it is even better when that way.
Congratulations!
Comment Written 12-May-2005
