Little Poems
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Comment from Nottoway
I like this little ditty!
I somehow imagine a bright idea that started with "honey,let's do boxing as a great way to exercise! The result may have been she really had a good reason for one helluva a punch!
Just my take on a clever piece and what it could possibly mean to the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I like this little ditty!
I somehow imagine a bright idea that started with "honey,let's do boxing as a great way to exercise! The result may have been she really had a good reason for one helluva a punch!
Just my take on a clever piece and what it could possibly mean to the reader.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thanks Nottoway. Great idea.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
These short works do seem to deliver quite a punch! HeHe. Your
message is clear and to the point. Well presented with a good
picture and word choice. Thank yo for sharing.
Robin :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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These short works do seem to deliver quite a punch! HeHe. Your
message is clear and to the point. Well presented with a good
picture and word choice. Thank yo for sharing.
Robin :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thanks Robin. Like your pun on punch.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture you found to complement this little poem. I had to laugh at your poem, specially as it was a man and a woman. You said a lot in such few words.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Excellent picture you found to complement this little poem. I had to laugh at your poem, specially as it was a man and a woman. You said a lot in such few words.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thanks robina. It was a fun write.
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Yes, nice. Welcome, Ine
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treischel,
Such a few words to describe an important duck, the only time it is good to be missed. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Aloha Treischel,
Such a few words to describe an important duck, the only time it is good to be missed. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you Ginger.
Comment from Elares
Tight. Concise. Inventive. Strikingly descriptive. This was very nicely done. It is notoriously difficult to express oneself in so few words, yet with so much meaning. Keep up the great work. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Tight. Concise. Inventive. Strikingly descriptive. This was very nicely done. It is notoriously difficult to express oneself in so few words, yet with so much meaning. Keep up the great work. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Thank you Ekares. Glad you liked it.
Comment from GracieAnn
Clever set up with a got ya ending with humor. You've met the syllable count effectively while keeping balance and logical meaning.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Clever set up with a got ya ending with humor. You've met the syllable count effectively while keeping balance and logical meaning.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Thank you GracieAnm.
Comment from AnonymousWisdom
Short, sweet, and to the point.
For such a short poem and word restraints, you managed to tell a story.
Made me smile a little.
I enjoyed reading.
Great job and thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Short, sweet, and to the point.
For such a short poem and word restraints, you managed to tell a story.
Made me smile a little.
I enjoyed reading.
Great job and thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
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Thank you Anonymous. If I made you crack a smile, I'm happy.
