Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid

Excellent

Aloha Treischel,
This is a fantastic bubble poem, I love the words and the colors with bubble shapes, very clever. Sure makes me want to go blow some bubbles. I'm finally getting around to my messages, sorry it took so long.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013

Thank you Ginger. Always pleasant when you visit!

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

A joyful read and filled with the wonders of childhood. How we dream of those days of carefree and almost problem free days! As the bubbles will have rainbow colors, you might consider mixing the rainbow words' colors in each stanza to create the bubble effect better and simulating the rainbow hue in the stanza. Overall a very good effort at making a live bubble within the poem.
Good write too.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013

Thanks Ritchie good suggestion.

reply by 9999pool on 11-Apr-2013

It may be a bit playful with the colors mixing but children will like it, I am sure. Smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

What kid doesn't enjoy blowing bubbles! This is a magical thing for them. A great summertime fun. The magic of seeing them floating in the air in all sizes and bursting before theit eyes. Great job! Sararb :)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013

Thank you Sara. Yes, a joyful thought.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

The joys of youth. You captured it wonderfully in this free verse poem. Creative with excellent visual imagery created. Nicely done. Great job.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013

Thank you sunnilicious.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

And in colors too. Lovely write that shares the joy of a true
bubble blower. Such a simple childhood delight. Now they have big
bubble machines. I like the rings the best. the children not only run after them, they create them. Smiles. Robin

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thanks Robin. Yes, they are fun.

Comment from yonashalom

Excellent

Cute poem. It is a easy read and delightful. It is so true that the bubbles are fun but short lived as they pop. :( ~Yona

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Hi Yona, haven't heard from you for a while. Thanks for stoping by for a review and comment.

Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

What artistic flair! I like your little orbs of poetic joy! And in different colors, too! Bubbles are such a delightful treat for the young and the old(er) alike.

Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Marsha

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thank you Marsha. Yes young and old.

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

oh you old softy you ................ and me too. I still love blowing bubbles, because I know this may be REALLY hard for you to believe, but I am still a kid at heart lol. fun write Tom, best Indie

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thanks Indie. Never doubted it.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The writer does a good job of targeting the readers. The photo is a good one and it relays the message of fun to a child. The only thing that sticks out to me is if the child would know the meaning of spheres. Other than that, this piece is good to go.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thank you Righteous. Good point, I guess it depends on their age.

Comment from Supe

Excellent

Well done! Bubbles, doesn't every kid love that. Your clip art complements the bubbly stanzas. Fun, light, and orbs of joy.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thank you Suoe.