From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The First Light"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
6 total reviews
Comment from vkmack
Favorite line and enough explanation for it all: The journey of life, needs a loving compass. Wow. You just have a talent for putting it all right there. That is the reason for every religion in existence. This is another great piece of poetry. But I want this line on a t-shirt, and I'm not being sarcastic. Seriously. Thanks for this one.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Favorite line and enough explanation for it all: The journey of life, needs a loving compass. Wow. You just have a talent for putting it all right there. That is the reason for every religion in existence. This is another great piece of poetry. But I want this line on a t-shirt, and I'm not being sarcastic. Seriously. Thanks for this one.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I think I forgot to push the save key and wanted to make sure you got my sincere THANK YOU! I always look forward to your reviews and this one especially motivates me. I'm working on the T shirts and you get the first one! Cheers and thanks! Vance
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Good deal! I did not get the original thanks, but this had to be even better. I await delivery of the t-shirt--impatiently.
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Comment from Glasstruth
Back in the nineties there was a show, I think called, "Dinosaurs," or something of that nature. They lived like humans, watched TV, went to work, etc... but when the head of the family (man "Dinosaur" of the house) found out for sure there's a heaven, all he did was watch TV, eat potato chips and said he's waiting to go. Can't wait. They say the mystery "unnamed entity" is what makes the challenge. A very clear thought provoking piece of writing. Couldn't have been written any better. Superb! Les
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Back in the nineties there was a show, I think called, "Dinosaurs," or something of that nature. They lived like humans, watched TV, went to work, etc... but when the head of the family (man "Dinosaur" of the house) found out for sure there's a heaven, all he did was watch TV, eat potato chips and said he's waiting to go. Can't wait. They say the mystery "unnamed entity" is what makes the challenge. A very clear thought provoking piece of writing. Couldn't have been written any better. Superb! Les
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Les: I wrote a long and detailes epexegesis about why I wrote this poem and blah blah...then lost it all with a keyboard bump! But the important part is the genuine THANK YOU and the message that I deeply respect your genius in poetry and so appreciate a six from you. I shall write more about Light..where GOD lives! Vance
Comment from MelissaBickel
Vance I wish I had another six for this lovely poem. I love how you words beg to be heard and seen. I can't think of a lovelier to show thanks to that Supreme Heavely Father.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Vance I wish I had another six for this lovely poem. I love how you words beg to be heard and seen. I can't think of a lovelier to show thanks to that Supreme Heavely Father.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Ah..Melissa...I knew YOU would get this and I truly appreciate your heartfelt and lovely review! I'm sure the environment of GOD is light and I wish all would consider it... Blessings! Vaance
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I just reread my reply Vance and I realized I need a dictionary. LOL...I missed a lot of words. I think my fingers run faster than my thoughts.
Comment from Lobengula
This was a lovely poem, Vance. This one really makes me think. Did God make the Earth in seven days? Was it the Big Bang? Is the Earth a mere 10,000 years old, like the evangelicals insist, or 8.6 billion years? This is a mystery we'll never know until we die. Lovely piece of work, Vance. Well done.
Every good wish, Mike
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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This was a lovely poem, Vance. This one really makes me think. Did God make the Earth in seven days? Was it the Big Bang? Is the Earth a mere 10,000 years old, like the evangelicals insist, or 8.6 billion years? This is a mystery we'll never know until we die. Lovely piece of work, Vance. Well done.
Every good wish, Mike
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much Mike..always a pleasure to hear from you and really appreciate your thoughts and comments!Blessings ! Vance
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Always great to hear from you, old man
Every good wish,
Mike
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Vance,
A thought provoking work that shares your nuggets of wisdom to the readers. Well penned and presenting a sense of wonder as I read your work.
A great job on this one, I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Edit check: (From your description)
"A manifestatiion of Gog"// manifestation, God
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi Vance,
A thought provoking work that shares your nuggets of wisdom to the readers. Well penned and presenting a sense of wonder as I read your work.
A great job on this one, I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Edit check: (From your description)
"A manifestatiion of Gog"// manifestation, God
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Maureen: thanks for (as always) and encourating review. Thanks also for the edit error and I shall repair immediately. Have a wonderful day! Blessings, Vance
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend a very meaningful poem that I enjoyed it reads very well and I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend a very meaningful poem that I enjoyed it reads very well and I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Dear Jill: Thanks for reviewing and thanks for the encouragement! I hope this will help guide many minds to the power of light and to ponder the reality that there is nothing in the universe with greater power OR...greater mystery! Blessings! Vance
