Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Trio (three brothers) acted naturally and turned adventurous to enjoy freedom and saving punishment from mother who appreciates later trio adventure, exemplified cantankerous kids psycho behaviour, I liked. 6/044

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thank you Alcreator. A very clear assessment.

Comment from vapros

Excellent

Five stars for a courageous adventure story, presented in verse form. Three little boys are capable of nearly any trick that might suit their purposes. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thank you, vapros. So true!

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

I think this is adorable. A nice little story in rhymes. It brings back memories, too. I ran away once. By myself about 9, probably. I had to do dishes for a week. thanks for sharing these memories. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thanks Miss Sally, it's fun to think about those stupid things kids do.

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

I love this story poem! This sounds like something three brothers would cook up together! I can just imagine how scared your parents must have been, and mom would have been so relieved that you were okay, that she would have forgotten about everything else. This sounds exactly the way that I would have reacted! Sara :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thanks Sara. Yup, moms every where are that way, I think.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

What a delightful tale. Your descriptive words paint a picture of the
three little musketeers off to conquer the world with out rules
or naps. I can imagine the panic felt by your parents. But it made
it made for a great tale. Smiles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thank you Robin. It was fun to write. The things kids will do! Smile, Tom.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

You had quite the adventure didn't you? Something most boys and girl go through if they are not happy at home. Frivolous for sure but nevertheless, it happens.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thanks Gungalo. Fun to think back on. Smiles, Tom.

reply by Gungalo on 04-Apr-2013

Tom. Hmmmmm I can see why you've held back for so long. JK.

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

love this poem treischel and reminds me of the many times I too ran away. I think it is great to put these memories into poetry form for perhaps our grandchildren, etc to see and that way even in death we will be able to be a little part of their life. mm, is that a bit morbid? sorry, lol xx

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Thanks Indie. Not morbid at all. Smiles, Tom.

reply by Indie Skreet on 04-Apr-2013

:)