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Comment from barkingdog
Ah, 'tis true until the damn book falls on the floor and opens to that blasted page throwing barbed words back into our soul.
Maybe, sacrificial burning is better than closing it. LOL
Great post, Debbie. Life is constantly re-writing itself as we turn the pages and journal ourselves forward.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Ah, 'tis true until the damn book falls on the floor and opens to that blasted page throwing barbed words back into our soul.
Maybe, sacrificial burning is better than closing it. LOL
Great post, Debbie. Life is constantly re-writing itself as we turn the pages and journal ourselves forward.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Your review is so much better than my poem!!! Thanks, Ellen~Debbie
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Debbie
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a befitting accent that
enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Well Done ~ Debbie
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a befitting accent that
enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Just love the way the photo fits the poem. Nice color scheme and wording giving the progression, rhythm and flow for an edgy read. Thanks for sharing, Deb
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Just love the way the photo fits the poem. Nice color scheme and wording giving the progression, rhythm and flow for an edgy read. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review and stars~Debbie
Comment from Zinnia48
I really like the simplicity of this poem. Your language is sparse and composition is tight. This leaves nothing but the stark message about beginnings. thanks! Caroline
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I really like the simplicity of this poem. Your language is sparse and composition is tight. This leaves nothing but the stark message about beginnings. thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review and stars~Debbie
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
To me this holds an exceptional truth. Once the day is over the problems of that day need to be put to rest too. Alady was discussing with a friend of mine how stressful her situation was..she's doing long term care of her 90 year old mother with dementia. She said oh yesterdays gone and all the problems with it are gone, I was successful and got through them. I will deal with today's problems and not worry about tomorrows problems for tomorrow never really comes. Excellent piece. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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To me this holds an exceptional truth. Once the day is over the problems of that day need to be put to rest too. Alady was discussing with a friend of mine how stressful her situation was..she's doing long term care of her 90 year old mother with dementia. She said oh yesterdays gone and all the problems with it are gone, I was successful and got through them. I will deal with today's problems and not worry about tomorrows problems for tomorrow never really comes. Excellent piece. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review and stars. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from visionary1234
And thank heaven that it does, Deb, hmm? Sometimes I'm VERY happy to see the last of some days - today being one of them, as I have inherited my husband's roaring cold! a a a a chooo! :)))S
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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And thank heaven that it does, Deb, hmm? Sometimes I'm VERY happy to see the last of some days - today being one of them, as I have inherited my husband's roaring cold! a a a a chooo! :)))S
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Feel better soon. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Debbie, similar to your last one and the no mistakes in tomorrow allows a new day to dawn.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Hi Debbie, similar to your last one and the no mistakes in tomorrow allows a new day to dawn.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Yes, that seems to be the theme on my mind. Thank you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Very good Deb and it's all in one piece too. It really is a great write that all can learn from. I liked this:
Another chapter
has closed
Yesterday
needs put away
No longer
harbor its pain
Life starts over fresh again
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Very good Deb and it's all in one piece too. It really is a great write that all can learn from. I liked this:
Another chapter
has closed
Yesterday
needs put away
No longer
harbor its pain
Life starts over fresh again
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much :) Debbie
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Comment from adewpearl
You have 5 syllables followed by 2 syllables instead of 3 followed by 4 - you might want to take away the whitney label from this one so people don't mark down.
I like the poem, its flow and rhymes - so I really wouldn't suggest you rework the poem, just change it to a free verse :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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You have 5 syllables followed by 2 syllables instead of 3 followed by 4 - you might want to take away the whitney label from this one so people don't mark down.
I like the poem, its flow and rhymes - so I really wouldn't suggest you rework the poem, just change it to a free verse :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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oops-chapter was supposed to be on the second line. It reads exactly the same, but has the correct syllable count. Thanks so much for catching it.!!! Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Life goes start fresh each day. I use a behavior plan with my first graders that they start each day fresh. It always surprises them when they start fresh the next day. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Life goes start fresh each day. I use a behavior plan with my first graders that they start each day fresh. It always surprises them when they start fresh the next day. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you. Hope you had a good holiday weekend~Debbie
