Christ Has Risen
He suffered and die, but rose again!22 total reviews
Comment from akulkumol
Very well written poem tells about the Lord, he suffered beyond our imagination bleeding to death with immeasurable pain. It's very difficult to guess how he suffered for us. Your description is vivid. Thank you for sharing .
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Very well written poem tells about the Lord, he suffered beyond our imagination bleeding to death with immeasurable pain. It's very difficult to guess how he suffered for us. Your description is vivid. Thank you for sharing .
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much. Sorry to be so late in my reply. rox
Comment from El Coyote
Your poem is a reminder of the suffering endured for all of us. I think it's probably human nature to want to avoid the reality of the pain and suffering, but your words remind us of the sacrifice. I like your emphatic use of the word, "No."
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Your poem is a reminder of the suffering endured for all of us. I think it's probably human nature to want to avoid the reality of the pain and suffering, but your words remind us of the sacrifice. I like your emphatic use of the word, "No."
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much. Sorry to be so late in my reply. Rox
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. The piece rhymes good, it flows well and the harmony ties it all together. This photo reminds me of watching the Passion last night and how much Jesus went through for us. You did a good job with this one.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. The piece rhymes good, it flows well and the harmony ties it all together. This photo reminds me of watching the Passion last night and how much Jesus went through for us. You did a good job with this one.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much.
Comment from God's Writer
You make tears of sadness and joy run down my face. Such awesome artwork. Such a powerful sermon. I thank you and need your prayers. The pain is very severe.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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You make tears of sadness and joy run down my face. Such awesome artwork. Such a powerful sermon. I thank you and need your prayers. The pain is very severe.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Oh Erick I'm so sorry you are having so much pain. That can sure ruin your day. ={ I will keep you in prayer. Do you have meds for the pain? I hope so. You feel better soon. Thanks you for the sweet review. The pic is from the movie The Passion. I have never seen it, but want to. I don't know why I haven't. The man who played Christ said he got so into the part, it was so emotional for him. He is a neat Christian man. Anyway thank you and feel better. I hope you are able to enjoy some of Easter anyway. Rox
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Roxanna,
Thank you for the well written poem that tells about our Lord, he did suffer beyond what photos show as it is said he was unrecognizable as a human. It's very hard to imagine how he suffered for us. Your description says it very well. Wish all would accept His special gift. Thank you for sharing your faith with this poem. Wish I had a "6" Star. Please accept this special award.
Have a blessed Easter!
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Aloha Roxanna,
Thank you for the well written poem that tells about our Lord, he did suffer beyond what photos show as it is said he was unrecognizable as a human. It's very hard to imagine how he suffered for us. Your description says it very well. Wish all would accept His special gift. Thank you for sharing your faith with this poem. Wish I had a "6" Star. Please accept this special award.
Have a blessed Easter!
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thanks you so much Ginger. =}
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes he did suffer so much and he done it for us all this is well written and reads you have expressed your thoughts so strongly I enjoyed happy Easter regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Yes he did suffer so much and he done it for us all this is well written and reads you have expressed your thoughts so strongly I enjoyed happy Easter regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thank you friend, Rox
Comment from mumsyone
The message in your poem is absolutely true; however, the poem itself needs some work:
He suffered and die (died), but rose again!
For pointing out hypocrisy, the religious leaders (leaders') gift,
He washed his hand (hands) of this man's death,
Nail (Nailed) to a cross with spikes thick and dull.
Concurring (conquering) death and sin.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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The message in your poem is absolutely true; however, the poem itself needs some work:
He suffered and die (died), but rose again!
For pointing out hypocrisy, the religious leaders (leaders') gift,
He washed his hand (hands) of this man's death,
Nail (Nailed) to a cross with spikes thick and dull.
Concurring (conquering) death and sin.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Goodness, how can I read something over 100x and miss so much. How embarrassing. ={ Thank you for catching all these, they have been corrected.
Comment from Econ Teacher
This was a really deep and thoughtful poem. However, at the end it almost became comical because of the wrong words.
Angles should be angels
And
Resin should be risen.
The poem is strong and appropriately timed because of the holiday.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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This was a really deep and thoughtful poem. However, at the end it almost became comical because of the wrong words.
Angles should be angels
And
Resin should be risen.
The poem is strong and appropriately timed because of the holiday.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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I had a ton of misspellings. So embarrassing, why can't spell check tell you when your using the wrong word? =} Thanks so much. Rox
Comment from Deniz22
Excellent! You've got it all in there ...I believe God made it simple so that anyone can understand how to be saved. You have two misspellings that you will want to fix I'm sure; Christ has "Resin"! "Concurring" death and sin. God bless and happy true Easter! Dennis
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Excellent! You've got it all in there ...I believe God made it simple so that anyone can understand how to be saved. You have two misspellings that you will want to fix I'm sure; Christ has "Resin"! "Concurring" death and sin. God bless and happy true Easter! Dennis
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Yes I had many goofs. I need a 'right word' check. =} Thanks so much Dennis.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, roxana, you did an excellent job writing this couplet poem about the crucifixion of Christ. excellent imagery presented. your last quatrain has two errors==angels instead of angles and Risen instead of Resin.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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this is very well written, roxana, you did an excellent job writing this couplet poem about the crucifixion of Christ. excellent imagery presented. your last quatrain has two errors==angels instead of angles and Risen instead of Resin.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Yes I goofed on many words. Goodness, how embarrassing. ={ Thanks you for the kind review anyway. Rox
