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Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha Treishel,
Yes, you are right never pass up a kiss. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
    Thank you Ginger. Kiss away!
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
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heats my soul
burns moments into memories

This line is wonderful... this whole poem is fabulous, it reads beautifully both silently and aloud. Splendidly romantic. :) Your choice of art and layout compliment the poem perfectly.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
    Thank you Gypsy Starchild. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
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Always love and kiss the one you love and often. A good
message, well scripted and enjoyed. A lovely sentiment shared
by many. thank you for the message. Smiles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
    Thanks Robin. Thought I'd try a cameo.
Comment from atlas-manoftherain
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burns moments into memories" I loved this line the most. A nice succinct poem. I shall try to keep in mind your advice in the author's notes as well. Write on.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
    Thank you atlas-manoftherain. Good idea.
Comment from Gungalo
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Very good Treischel and a beautiful write. So great your words in this one guy, What a beautiful Cameo you have drawn for us.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
    Thank you Gungalo. I had a fabulous teacher. You! Your beautiful love poetry is inspiring.
reply by Gungalo on 29-Mar-2013
    Thanks so very much Treischel.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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beautifully written and a loving message - depends who's doing the kissing of course, I have one I would prefer to another :) best Indie 'xx'

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
    Thank you Indie. Good point!