Unique
A Little Octogrammic Mould Breaker...33 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Actually the other side of brilliant, me girl. so nice to have come across such a unique writer and chick who stands back for no one. You are truly a woman with diamonds in her hair and rebellion in her heart.
I absolutely loved this poem from start to finish.
Well done
You rock, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Actually the other side of brilliant, me girl. so nice to have come across such a unique writer and chick who stands back for no one. You are truly a woman with diamonds in her hair and rebellion in her heart.
I absolutely loved this poem from start to finish.
Well done
You rock, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Haha, many thanks Nebuk. Much appreciate your delightful review.
Cheers P
PS I can't be anything other than myself.
Comment from Bellringer
Closet, what you so creatively share in your signature-styled poem and in your author's notes are very true, encouraging and most helpful. It takes courage to do something different, but it also involves hard but rewarding work. As usual, your lines are well thought out with humorous twist. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Closet, what you so creatively share in your signature-styled poem and in your author's notes are very true, encouraging and most helpful. It takes courage to do something different, but it also involves hard but rewarding work. As usual, your lines are well thought out with humorous twist. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Hey Hector...Have a blessed Easter and thanks for a wonderful review.
Cheers P
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Closet, wishing you and yours a wonderful Easter with a basket full of love, hope, and peace. Blessings, Hector
Comment from jlsavell
closetpoetjester, I wouldn't dare hit you where it hurts. Love your poetry and I love your out of the box, oft times totally maniacal thinking or creations. It is highly entertaining and a lesson in absolute creativity. Some of the best writers are absurdest, and I think you fit the bill. well done girl, well done... jlsavell
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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closetpoetjester, I wouldn't dare hit you where it hurts. Love your poetry and I love your out of the box, oft times totally maniacal thinking or creations. It is highly entertaining and a lesson in absolute creativity. Some of the best writers are absurdest, and I think you fit the bill. well done girl, well done... jlsavell
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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LOL Thanks so much, I appreciate your support.
Stay in that unique zone, for sure, I recommend it. Crazy, but unique!
Cheers P
Comment from djsaxon
P, you are kickin' some serious ass this year! Can't do the sixpack, I've burned them all. If you haven't already, check out gregory shipman and twowheels - prose writers, but both awesome! Won't disseminate on the poem, it rocks from go to whoa. Favorite line (among many) - "Remember...every word you say here, has been said before." David Bowie once said that "there is no such thing as original thought, only tasteful thieves." He was referring to music, but I believe it is true with writing as well. 'Tasteful Thieves.' That so has to be a poem (me first LOL). Dunno what sort of ink you are dipping that quill into, but order another 500 litres! Lubs ya - DJ
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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P, you are kickin' some serious ass this year! Can't do the sixpack, I've burned them all. If you haven't already, check out gregory shipman and twowheels - prose writers, but both awesome! Won't disseminate on the poem, it rocks from go to whoa. Favorite line (among many) - "Remember...every word you say here, has been said before." David Bowie once said that "there is no such thing as original thought, only tasteful thieves." He was referring to music, but I believe it is true with writing as well. 'Tasteful Thieves.' That so has to be a poem (me first LOL). Dunno what sort of ink you are dipping that quill into, but order another 500 litres! Lubs ya - DJ
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks very much DJ.
I appreciate your review.
Cheers P
Comment from rhymelord
My only comment would be "awesome", but one is not allowed any brief word of praise, so I'll have to add that I am so pleased you did not use the comparative, so often heard from ill spoken TV types of being "more" unique than anybody else.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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My only comment would be "awesome", but one is not allowed any brief word of praise, so I'll have to add that I am so pleased you did not use the comparative, so often heard from ill spoken TV types of being "more" unique than anybody else.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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LOL Thanks Reg. Hardly here at the mo, so have to save my uniqueness and stash it. Haha
Cheers P
Comment from prodigal
A very unique poem. I like the rhythm and once again I see a similarity to Jude's writing.
This poem is very well integrated. What I mean by that is that you are headed somewhere with it. Basically you have 5 parts
1. I know my own unique voice
2. Continuation - labeled freak :) funny
3. Have to work with what you've got
4. You are improving
5. Transition to reader - you can find your own unique voice. Good. Too many cookie cutter poems out there. Find your voice and shout.
I like it. Have a good week - p
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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A very unique poem. I like the rhythm and once again I see a similarity to Jude's writing.
This poem is very well integrated. What I mean by that is that you are headed somewhere with it. Basically you have 5 parts
1. I know my own unique voice
2. Continuation - labeled freak :) funny
3. Have to work with what you've got
4. You are improving
5. Transition to reader - you can find your own unique voice. Good. Too many cookie cutter poems out there. Find your voice and shout.
I like it. Have a good week - p
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Why thanks so much. I appreciate your list of acknowledgements and yep, always working with what subject matter that trickles in....even if it happens to be Lint. LOL
Cheers P
Comment from Jean Lutz
As soon as I clicked on the title I knew this would be about you. You sure came out of the closet with this one. Now let's hope other FanStorians will do it too.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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As soon as I clicked on the title I knew this would be about you. You sure came out of the closet with this one. Now let's hope other FanStorians will do it too.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks Jean.
Have a great Easter.
Cheers P
Comment from Indie Skreet
ah my darlin' I love this, but the f-ing system out of sixes. not sure how I missed this - I must delete my in-box. anyway hun from one unique freak to another, I say 'keep it up' and just think how much crazier the world would be if there were too many like us. luv'n'hugs P, Indie xx
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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ah my darlin' I love this, but the f-ing system out of sixes. not sure how I missed this - I must delete my in-box. anyway hun from one unique freak to another, I say 'keep it up' and just think how much crazier the world would be if there were too many like us. luv'n'hugs P, Indie xx
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks indie, I promise I'll drop in soon and catch up on some posts...trying to finish my website...got a mad husband on my case at the moment. Please bear with me and thanks for an awesome review.
Cheers P
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lol, aren't they all? don't worry honey, I will be delighted to see you whenever :) xx
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by the way someone compared my Sexually Disturbed to the way you write - flattering :D xx
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Nope they aren't...well at least...not like fucking mine mate.
*snicker*
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Sirriusly.
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lolling girl - never mind, you can always have an affair like i did .......... actually don't, that is shit advice!
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Jesus! What? I'm Sexually Disturbed...
Better go see what all the fuss is about! LOL
Hang on, gotta put kids to bed, and I'll be back
XXX
Lub Peeeee
PS What a fucking compliment...I think...
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NOT! LMAO
Kidding.
You SERIOUSLY have you're own style, but I'm sure chuffed to get a mention, as sexually disturbing as that may be.
Back sooooon.
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I am lolling girly xx
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Yes hun, that is shit advice.
LOL
But I LOVE you for thinkin of me...X
and my vajay...ah never mind!
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You have a big supply of lollies don't ya?
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indie word xx and yes, I lol quite a bit otherwise I would simply slit me wrists - still lolling!
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks again for stretching yourself and sharing the results with us. I enjoyed your rhymes, along with the "badge" and "boutique" metaphors and "cologne" simile, plus your repeats. I appreciate your good advice and being a role model.
P.S. I just noticed your updated, profile picture--I like your new, sexy glasses and your pose with POHM, which I just realized plays on "POEM"!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks again for stretching yourself and sharing the results with us. I enjoyed your rhymes, along with the "badge" and "boutique" metaphors and "cologne" simile, plus your repeats. I appreciate your good advice and being a role model.
P.S. I just noticed your updated, profile picture--I like your new, sexy glasses and your pose with POHM, which I just realized plays on "POEM"!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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LOL Thanks Joan and yes I noticed that in an email awhile ago...POHM indeed! LOL
Cheers P
Comment from ravenblack
you definately have a unique voice and, as jimi hendrix would say, you fly your freak flag well- indeed, w/a purpose. to me, this is a battle cry, shout it out and take no prisoners, break the molds and yes, stop being stuck in a tired groove spouting point-earning crapola. dab on some warpaint and keep up the good fight. you know i'm with you!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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you definately have a unique voice and, as jimi hendrix would say, you fly your freak flag well- indeed, w/a purpose. to me, this is a battle cry, shout it out and take no prisoners, break the molds and yes, stop being stuck in a tired groove spouting point-earning crapola. dab on some warpaint and keep up the good fight. you know i'm with you!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks RB and I'll fly that fricki...whoops I mean freakin flag as high as possible! LOL
Hope your 'puter is fixed soon.
Cheers P
