Cold Soul
It's a very sentimental, sad and relatable poem.2 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Your work is well penned yet sad too. Your syllables are spot on and a strong submission for this 5-7-5 contest.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
"I am very cold 5
And so alone in this world 7
My heart is lonely" 5
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Your work is well penned yet sad too. Your syllables are spot on and a strong submission for this 5-7-5 contest.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
"I am very cold 5
And so alone in this world 7
My heart is lonely" 5
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you! I'm new to the site so I wasn't sure if others would think it was good or bad or not.
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Welcome to FanStory - we are all students learning and exploring with our writing.
Have fun.:)
Hugs
Maureen
Comment from Supe
good luck in this contest. It has a good expression of a cold soul. Nice job on this. I think you will do well. It suits not having a picture to go along with it. alone/lonely. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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good luck in this contest. It has a good expression of a cold soul. Nice job on this. I think you will do well. It suits not having a picture to go along with it. alone/lonely. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.
