The Pearl Divers
Pearl diving in 188730 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Statistics say that efforts to find pearls by diving not so good. I saw a black pearl at a museum in San Francisco along with black coral also valuable. A very deserved six to you. I wish all the giant clams (Tridacnia - sp?) that I found diving in the Indian Ocean had giant pearls - not really necessary to be black. Hope this finds you well.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Statistics say that efforts to find pearls by diving not so good. I saw a black pearl at a museum in San Francisco along with black coral also valuable. A very deserved six to you. I wish all the giant clams (Tridacnia - sp?) that I found diving in the Indian Ocean had giant pearls - not really necessary to be black. Hope this finds you well.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hello Alan, All is well Done Under - thank you for reading some of our history. Wow! Can you imagine the size of a pearl seeded in a clam shell! Take care friend. Kay XX
Comment from jlsavell
Kace, my wonderful friend, your signature style shines in this work. Heart, compassion and knowledge, as you always bring to the forefront one's sacrifice whom we do not realize but partake of the harvest they risked their lioves to procure. Wonderful execution my friend, wonderful. Jimi
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Kace, my wonderful friend, your signature style shines in this work. Heart, compassion and knowledge, as you always bring to the forefront one's sacrifice whom we do not realize but partake of the harvest they risked their lioves to procure. Wonderful execution my friend, wonderful. Jimi
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Jimi, Thank you so much for reading; glad you enjoyed part of our history. Blessings, Kace XX
Comment from EMB
You see, that's why I'll never take up diving with oxygen tanks. That's just way too scary for my taste, and this poem just reinforces that fear. LOL Snorkeling rocks! Haha!
Very nice piece. :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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You see, that's why I'll never take up diving with oxygen tanks. That's just way too scary for my taste, and this poem just reinforces that fear. LOL Snorkeling rocks! Haha!
Very nice piece. :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Edward, Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed part of our history. The snorkel is safe, don't have to go deeper! Maybe the great white shark would interest you! LOL - Kay.
Comment from l.raven
WOW!!! Kaye, This is a great story. Sad But very well written. It is so much safer than it use to be. I didn't know a lot of this. Thank You so much. A great write. Wish I had a six for you. Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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WOW!!! Kaye, This is a great story. Sad But very well written. It is so much safer than it use to be. I didn't know a lot of this. Thank You so much. A great write. Wish I had a six for you. Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Hi Linda, Thanks so much for reading; part of our history. Glad you liked the story. Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from oNray
What a way of life. The dangers are so humorous then to think enough treasure must be found to pay expenses and divers and captains and on and on. This poem does stir the mind and make the reader think
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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What a way of life. The dangers are so humorous then to think enough treasure must be found to pay expenses and divers and captains and on and on. This poem does stir the mind and make the reader think
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much for reading about our history; greed has always taken first place. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from vkmack
This is very good work. There's something here I can't quite put my finger on. I believe it is the rhythm, which is so unique because of the use of the dashes. It has a choppiness to it, like a rough sea. Very creative. The imagery is impressive as well. Great work.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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This is very good work. There's something here I can't quite put my finger on. I believe it is the rhythm, which is so unique because of the use of the dashes. It has a choppiness to it, like a rough sea. Very creative. The imagery is impressive as well. Great work.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Hi vkmack, Thanks so much for reading; part of our history with the sea. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi K,
You have penned a wonderful poem about the danger in pearl diving. I guess I never thought of it before now but this poem will keep me informed for a long time. Your rhyming is first rate, the flow is like liquid falling and the theme is superb. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Hi K,
You have penned a wonderful poem about the danger in pearl diving. I guess I never thought of it before now but this poem will keep me informed for a long time. Your rhyming is first rate, the flow is like liquid falling and the theme is superb. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Wow! Thank you my friend; I like to inform through my poems. So pleased that you enjoyed. Blessings, K.
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You are so welcome...M
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
What a morbid, yet historic and true tale. I enjoyed reading this and cannot offer any suggestions. For me it was a six star and hope the system allows me to give that.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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What a morbid, yet historic and true tale. I enjoyed reading this and cannot offer any suggestions. For me it was a six star and hope the system allows me to give that.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Hi Carolyn, Thanks so much for reading; history that I like to pass on about Australia. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This story is very interesting. I never gave much thought as to how pearls were harvested. It is good they have a better way now. How sad so many had to die before they found a way to harvest them safely. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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This story is very interesting. I never gave much thought as to how pearls were harvested. It is good they have a better way now. How sad so many had to die before they found a way to harvest them safely. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Hi Nancy, Thanks so much for reading; like to write about our history. Cheers, K.
Comment from donnadiann
Good alliterations and imagery in the first stanza. Very good information in the author notes. Effective photo and colors used. The language of this poem is very colorful and informational anduses words of its theme...pearls, sapphire:)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Good alliterations and imagery in the first stanza. Very good information in the author notes. Effective photo and colors used. The language of this poem is very colorful and informational anduses words of its theme...pearls, sapphire:)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed some of our history. Cheers, K.
