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The Hawaiian Humpback Whale

that moment of connection ...

48 total reviews 
Comment from wordsareus
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I really enjoyed reading your entry for the Non-Fiction writing contest. You are such a good writer. Your entry is informative and also makes me want to visit Hawaii someday.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Well you know where to stay when you do dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from angelmagnet
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Thank you for writing this excellent essay that is almost a plea for people to take action, saving our earth and the creatures who live here. I was lucky enough to be on a tourist boat that went out from Oahu. We saw mom and her calf in the water for a full half-hour. One of the best memories I have. Yep, we need to be stewards of this earth.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Bless you for your lovey six on this one angel! Yes, you don't get the impact until you really sit and 'commune' with these magnificent creatures, even for a short time. I love to take my son to the beach and watch him surfing ... with the spouts out just a few hundred yards from where he is. They're truly awesome beings. :)Sharyn
Comment from Gungalo
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What a beautiful story. It's true which makes it all the more important to hear. Whales are the largest mammal on earth and if they are endangered we are in trouble. Thanks for such a great story girl. I loved it.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Bless you gungalo! :)S
reply by Gungalo on 18-Mar-2013
    Sigh.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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This is very well written my friend about these beautiful creatures it is very informative and enjoyable well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Bless you Jill - thx so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha Sharyn,
This is an amazing write about the fantastic whales that we have in Hawaii. I enjoyed reading it and just have to send you this video. They played it at the church that I go to last Sunday. Since you just wrote about the stars I thought you would like this combination on the video.
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Bless you Ginger! I'll go get my headphones back from my 16-year-old (who's stolen them!) and listen to this piece. We are, indeed, lucky to live here, aren't we?
    :)Sharyn
Comment from October21
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Sharyn, here you offer common knowledge about this animal ie facts about the calfs and the animals diet, descriptions of the strong connection when one meets its eye, and the endangerment of this species as their numbers have fell so critically. Nowadays there are more animal species that are on the endangered list than those that are not. Brilliant work, I SO enjoyed! And really does open us up to how many wonders there are out there which we need to keep hold of for as long as we can. Such a beautiful piece:-)

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Bless you for your magic six on this one Shenel! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I LOVE going to the beach with my son, watching him surf, and seeing the whales spout a few hundred yards out from where he's on his board. These are truly majestic creatures!
    Thank you so much!
    :)sharyn
reply by October21 on 18-Mar-2013
    You're very welcome Sharyn! The piece was AMAZING! And your son is six foot? Tall LOL!... I'm only 5''4....:D
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    AND hunky!
reply by October21 on 18-Mar-2013
    Hehe!!!:-) LOL! I bet!!:-)
Comment from Sasha
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This is well written and it is impossible not to admire these awesome creatures.

I live in Mazatlan and we see the whales every year...it is awesome. I'm from Seattle and the Killer Whale is quite popular there.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    thx so much dear - glad to know your eye is feeling better! :)S
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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You have been there, my girl. You have touched the heart and soul through the eyes to the soul. I am happy for you and for the fact that you are ready to stand on your soap box and shout. Great job in teaching us lay people and yet allowing us the priveledge of entering this story through your eyes.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    thx so much Barb! :)S
Comment from Candyjean
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I loved your story of your encounter with the whales. This comes at a perfect time for me as my family has just made reservations to go whale watching in the pungent sound for May. I am doubly excited now after ready about your enjoyable ancounter.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Thx so much CJ - you'll be knocked out by these incredible creatures. Enjoy! :)S
Comment from CR Delport
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I read how you describe Hawaii, and it must be as close to paradise as you can get. An interesting story about some awesome creatures. I have never seen one in person, but I bet it is awesome.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    They are truly incredible creatures CR - thank you! :)S