Comment from Fusion48

Exceptional

Loved it!

Flowed well, characters alive in the mind, and a complete story in 791 words with a good twist at the end.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013

Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.

Comment from mbagby23

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your flash fiction. Revenge sometimes leads you bad things happening. Yet, sometimes the are lessons lead.

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013

Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.

reply by mbagby23 on 18-Mar-2013

Welcome.

reply by mbagby23 on 18-Mar-2013

Welcome.