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Comment from Robin Gilmor
That picture is fantastic of the big dog. Nature is so creative.
An enjoyable free verse that tells an interesting tale
of Ole Blue. This one seemed like a fun write. Smiles
Robin :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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That picture is fantastic of the big dog. Nature is so creative.
An enjoyable free verse that tells an interesting tale
of Ole Blue. This one seemed like a fun write. Smiles
Robin :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thanks Robin. It was.
Comment from heyjude
Treischel, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your tale of
Old Blue. What a lovely picture that you took. That
should be a great book. I'm sure you had fun writing
this.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Treischel, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your tale of
Old Blue. What a lovely picture that you took. That
should be a great book. I'm sure you had fun writing
this.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Yes I did. Thank you hey use.
Comment from Ira White
I love the Paul Bunyan stories and this is a nice addition. Always wondered if he had a dog and if not why? Adding in the ice caves to prove the story was true was a real nice touch. Love folk tales!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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I love the Paul Bunyan stories and this is a nice addition. Always wondered if he had a dog and if not why? Adding in the ice caves to prove the story was true was a real nice touch. Love folk tales!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Ira. For sure, everybody needs a good dig in the woods.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Innovatively eloquent, fantastically comparatively creative for Paul and Babe, exalted the fantasy tale, an edge endowed, saviour flash summoned, free flow of thoughts, candid funda images, icy visuals, I enjoyed the read.
06-289-44840-R written-Saturday 16 March 2013-Ex Reviewer Rank # 1
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Innovatively eloquent, fantastically comparatively creative for Paul and Babe, exalted the fantasy tale, an edge endowed, saviour flash summoned, free flow of thoughts, candid funda images, icy visuals, I enjoyed the read.
06-289-44840-R written-Saturday 16 March 2013-Ex Reviewer Rank # 1
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you Alcreator for the review and comments. My chilly dog just floated there for the imagination to behold.
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Thank you Alcreator for the review and comments. My chilly dog just floated there for the imagination to behold.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
The story is touching and goes right along with Paul Bunyan and Blue Ox. The dog adds definitely. I love your picture, I guess that was an ice cap in the center instead of an animal. You can tell, the picture caught my eye too.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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The story is touching and goes right along with Paul Bunyan and Blue Ox. The dog adds definitely. I love your picture, I guess that was an ice cap in the center instead of an animal. You can tell, the picture caught my eye too.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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I love how images can be so exceptional. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Mr T A Thoroughly enjoyable story my friend with a dazzling photo to add to this tale.. Like how your mind is a lot like mine "creative imagery" I like to call it .. once I was called is he crazy ?? Now that I'm older real older They just say I am eccentric lol
GOOD WORK MR T
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Mr T A Thoroughly enjoyable story my friend with a dazzling photo to add to this tale.. Like how your mind is a lot like mine "creative imagery" I like to call it .. once I was called is he crazy ?? Now that I'm older real older They just say I am eccentric lol
GOOD WORK MR T
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thanks Sir T. Glad you like the clilly dog.
Comment from sunnilicious
The only lumberjack stories I know revolve around pancakes. Good author notes. Creative narrative poem. It could be far-fetched but believable. Nicely done. Great!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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The only lumberjack stories I know revolve around pancakes. Good author notes. Creative narrative poem. It could be far-fetched but believable. Nicely done. Great!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treishchel, you did an excellent job writing this legend poem where you gave paul another travellign companion. i enjoyed reading this one.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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this is very well written, treishchel, you did an excellent job writing this legend poem where you gave paul another travellign companion. i enjoyed reading this one.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thane you so much sweetwoodjax jax.
Comment from mshirachot
That is a GREAT picture. It does indeed look like a blue dog. It accents your tall tale of a poem well.
One tip for this line: "Swiming in that big Lake" - no need to use a capital L on "lake".
Thanks for sharing this cheery poem!
Blessings!
Marsha
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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That is a GREAT picture. It does indeed look like a blue dog. It accents your tall tale of a poem well.
One tip for this line: "Swiming in that big Lake" - no need to use a capital L on "lake".
Thanks for sharing this cheery poem!
Blessings!
Marsha
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thanks Marsha. Good point. I do when referring to Lake Superior. to me it is THE Lake.
