Dreaming
Expresses the brevity of life and the importance of each day3 total reviews
Comment from DDLacy
Awesome! We all should make the best out of life...giving...sharing...doing, striving towards those dreams we so desire. Cherishing and appreciating what we have, thanking God for all of the blessings He's bestowed upon us. I've heard many sayings about life and I've learned to love this one best of all, "Give your loved ones (no matter who they are) their flowers while they can still smell them" because once their gone, you can't bring them back. So call them or pay them a visit sometime! Be happy, live, love and be thankful... It's amazing how finite wording can have so much meaning, I enjoyed your poem and thanks for the share! Best wishes to you!
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Awesome! We all should make the best out of life...giving...sharing...doing, striving towards those dreams we so desire. Cherishing and appreciating what we have, thanking God for all of the blessings He's bestowed upon us. I've heard many sayings about life and I've learned to love this one best of all, "Give your loved ones (no matter who they are) their flowers while they can still smell them" because once their gone, you can't bring them back. So call them or pay them a visit sometime! Be happy, live, love and be thankful... It's amazing how finite wording can have so much meaning, I enjoyed your poem and thanks for the share! Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
Comment from namkcirb
You deserve this rating. Short sweet and to the point. A lot said in a few words. Reads a certain truth. I do like to see punctuation points but that is not the thought of all poets. It is a very good work. Maybe we are entered in the same contest...? Thank you for sharing. Good luck and keep on writing.
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You deserve this rating. Short sweet and to the point. A lot said in a few words. Reads a certain truth. I do like to see punctuation points but that is not the thought of all poets. It is a very good work. Maybe we are entered in the same contest...? Thank you for sharing. Good luck and keep on writing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
Comment from Bender8982
I like the emotion you have used here, i am pleased with your writing style and imagery. great job and i look forward to seeing more work, keep it up :)
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I like the emotion you have used here, i am pleased with your writing style and imagery. great job and i look forward to seeing more work, keep it up :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
