Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Now are we really talking about a cyborg, or a car??? I often hear men talk to their cars like that! LOL, well done, Treischel, 55 words spot on! Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Thanks Sandra. Not my usual, but I thought I could manage 55 words.

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

I thought the model looked more like an TripleXXXZZZ toy modal, I mean model. Electrifying to the touch and tingling sensations does sound good for the feel good feelings. Wonder how much such a toy costs in the actual market. Well, Tommy, if you have a price, please name it. LOL.
Great write in less than 55 words!
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Thanks Ritchie. I usually only write poetry, but figured I could handle 55 words.

reply by 9999pool on 13-Mar-2013

Well, 55 words is a tall order and so you have to make it like you were selling that modal/model doll to electrify everyone to vote for you in the contest.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

That new model 75ZX cyborg female is something else

LOL Treischel you have done it!! The ultimate in female cyborgs. LOL Oh my is right.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thanks Gungalo. Smile!

reply by Gungalo on 12-Mar-2013

Smile

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

LOL. God I hope that day never comes.

'Oh, Dear, 'Oh, Dear I am late, I am late for an very important date of reviewing poems and stories of my friends. So, today as a response, I shall share a Joke of the day that has a flavor for writers:

TEACHER: What is the chemical formula for water?
SARAH: "HIJKLMNO"!
TEACHER: What are you talking about?
SARAH: Yesterday you said its H to O!

I have use speed reading skills again, for I truly do want to read the words.

Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thanks Jo. Just a response to a writing prompt. Thought I could handke 55words.

Comment from vani.g

Excellent

Hi.. That was amusing. The thought is altogether new.. I am sure, you did not want it to be funny...but i burst out with laughter and sheer mirth looking at the picture and the words...hats off to have taken such a tough contest and doing full justice to it... I thouroughly enjoyed the work.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thank you vani.g. I usually stick to poetry, but thought I could handle 55 words.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The writer leads the reader where the reader needs to go. The writer does a good job of tapping into the mind of the reader and painting the good picture in the readers mind. I like this. Good work.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thanks Righteous. Figured I could handle 55 words.