Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Winter Trip for Hedgerow School "Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
47 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
You always do such a great job with these, rhyming every line is so hard, but you make it seem effortless. Just one stanza I noticed #6 'everyone saw, some creatures that none of them had seen before.' Since it near the sea, what if you said, 'standing near the shore....none of them had seen before' ? Anyway it is well done and very cute.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You always do such a great job with these, rhyming every line is so hard, but you make it seem effortless. Just one stanza I noticed #6 'everyone saw, some creatures that none of them had seen before.' Since it near the sea, what if you said, 'standing near the shore....none of them had seen before' ? Anyway it is well done and very cute.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely and most thoughtful review, Roxanna, I most definitely will go and look at that! Thank you! :) Sandra
Comment from Gungalo
This is amazing Sandra and the kids will love it. It takes a lot gumption to write a kids story and this one is wonderful
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is amazing Sandra and the kids will love it. It takes a lot gumption to write a kids story and this one is wonderful
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely words, my dear friend! I'm so pleased you liked it. xsx Sandra
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That is delightful! I love it. That little bunch sure can have fun. Twenty nine stories. Are you proud or not? You have such a talent for this. Children all over are going to love your little critters.You story poems read so smooth. Well done!!! Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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That is delightful! I love it. That little bunch sure can have fun. Twenty nine stories. Are you proud or not? You have such a talent for this. Children all over are going to love your little critters.You story poems read so smooth. Well done!!! Nancy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much my dear friend! Even I was surprised at how many I'd written, I'm running out of ideas,LOL. I'm really pleased you liked it. Also, a HUGE thank you for the 6 stars!! :)Sandra xsx
Comment from Righteous Riter
The rhyme scheme is effective as the rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony pulls it all together. The passion of the writer is felt as this piece captures my attention from the beginning to end. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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The rhyme scheme is effective as the rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony pulls it all together. The passion of the writer is felt as this piece captures my attention from the beginning to end. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much, Righteous Riter, what a lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really love your stories. It takes real talent to sustain a smooth, meaningful storyline and specific meter and rhyme scheme while conveying a profoundly meaningful theme!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I really love your stories. It takes real talent to sustain a smooth, meaningful storyline and specific meter and rhyme scheme while conveying a profoundly meaningful theme!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Janice!! What a lovely review, I am so pleased you enjoyed this one too, and thank you, BIG time, for the 6 stars!!
You are really kind. xsx Sandra :)
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
Ok, I have researched the cost of having a refrigerated room added on to my house, and in this economy the expense is far to great... all hope is not lost though, I purchased a lottery ticket this morning when I went in to town to get coffee and a newspaper. :)
I am sad to say that I am out of sixes, because this delightful tale is more than deserving. Your writing makes my inner child gleeful. :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Ok, I have researched the cost of having a refrigerated room added on to my house, and in this economy the expense is far to great... all hope is not lost though, I purchased a lottery ticket this morning when I went in to town to get coffee and a newspaper. :)
I am sad to say that I am out of sixes, because this delightful tale is more than deserving. Your writing makes my inner child gleeful. :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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The lovely review you geve my poem, is worth far more than the 6 stars, it did give me a chuckle!! Thank you so much! I am so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra
Comment from terry drake
This is a great children's story in rhyme. The cadence was well done as you counted your meter and conducted the rhythm with care. Great little story line and very entertaining. I stumbled over this line thinking their should be a the before the sea: We have some nice friends who live here by sea. I did not count your meter.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is a great children's story in rhyme. The cadence was well done as you counted your meter and conducted the rhythm with care. Great little story line and very entertaining. I stumbled over this line thinking their should be a the before the sea: We have some nice friends who live here by sea. I did not count your meter.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much, Terry, and for spotting that illusive, 'the' I have put it in now, thank you for that and for the wonderful review. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra
Comment from donaldww
Timmy and Tommy are very prolific mice, and use their considerable skills to document their adventures with precision and panache.
Penguins playing on an icy beach with mice, rats, moles, and frogs make fun-filled scene, a great addition to your ongoing children's poems.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Timmy and Tommy are very prolific mice, and use their considerable skills to document their adventures with precision and panache.
Penguins playing on an icy beach with mice, rats, moles, and frogs make fun-filled scene, a great addition to your ongoing children's poems.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much, Donald, Timmy and Tommy are so pleased you think they are so clever! LOL, Thank you for this wonderful review, I am delighted you enjoyed it!:) Sandra
Comment from Indie Skreet
another enjoyable poem Sandra, of the Hedgerow escapades Good rhyme and rhythm as always and a delight for any parent to read at bedtime :) best Indie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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another enjoyable poem Sandra, of the Hedgerow escapades Good rhyme and rhythm as always and a delight for any parent to read at bedtime :) best Indie
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Indie, for this lovely review, so pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra
Comment from angelface2
How lovely. I'll bet the children just love them. I sure enjoyed reading this one.One suggestion. I think where it says, Cyril the Squirrel looked at Reggie(the) Rat. The should be in there.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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How lovely. I'll bet the children just love them. I sure enjoyed reading this one.One suggestion. I think where it says, Cyril the Squirrel looked at Reggie(the) Rat. The should be in there.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Angelface, for spotting my 'deliberate' mistake, LOL, I've been and changed it, thank you. And another thank you for your lovely review! :) Sandra
