All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from kiwisteveh
There you go - at least I have a six to give you!
I keep thinking I should try some free verse but I know I can't possibly compete with these gems of yours....
Love the joyous periwinkle day - may we have many more of them, although right now, in the middle of the worst drought hereabouts in living memory, I'd settle for some slate grey downpours.
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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There you go - at least I have a six to give you!
I keep thinking I should try some free verse but I know I can't possibly compete with these gems of yours....
Love the joyous periwinkle day - may we have many more of them, although right now, in the middle of the worst drought hereabouts in living memory, I'd settle for some slate grey downpours.
Steve
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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oh bless you Steve! I'm so glad you got to this one - needless to say, it was fun to write. You're so good at formal patter-verse (and every other formal verse for that matter). Do you write free verse? I actually haven't ready any of it if you do. Funny how some things come so easily - I wrote free verse even when I was 14 or 15 I remember. Blessings for the lovely six! :)S
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Colours fragrance speed and movement, jovial simple lovely hearty relation pleases life to move on, makes the poet happy, a nice feeling around is well versed, simply exposed an attitude toward living, symphonically said.
05-135-44186-Reviews Written-Wednesday 13-03-13-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Colours fragrance speed and movement, jovial simple lovely hearty relation pleases life to move on, makes the poet happy, a nice feeling around is well versed, simply exposed an attitude toward living, symphonically said.
05-135-44186-Reviews Written-Wednesday 13-03-13-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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thx so much Al - I see we almost share a birthday - mine's Nov 19th! :)Sharyn
Comment from GracieAnn
Invigorating and unique. I like the phrases, "leap deep run, red to red, stroking me alive". Shows originality in word combinations. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Invigorating and unique. I like the phrases, "leap deep run, red to red, stroking me alive". Shows originality in word combinations. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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thx so much Gracie - so glad you enjoyed this out! :)Sharyn
Comment from hifein
this is a wonderful, joyous, uplifting poem. the 'scents of salt...' stanza is glorious!!! reading this made me feel happy. you have found the right words to poetically share your ecstatic appreciation of all about you. great imagery. loved 'when i take my magic child to school each day' simply lovely simple sentence filled with love.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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this is a wonderful, joyous, uplifting poem. the 'scents of salt...' stanza is glorious!!! reading this made me feel happy. you have found the right words to poetically share your ecstatic appreciation of all about you. great imagery. loved 'when i take my magic child to school each day' simply lovely simple sentence filled with love.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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aaah, thank you SO much hifein - I so appreciate your 'vibing' with this piece AND for your magic six stars!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from happysolo
Seems so much of what made you happy in your poem, makes me happy too. You described it all beautifully. We should all stop and take more time to see the beauty in the simple.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Seems so much of what made you happy in your poem, makes me happy too. You described it all beautifully. We should all stop and take more time to see the beauty in the simple.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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yes we should - thank you for doing so my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Curt Mongold
In the midst of the hustle and bustle of our lives, if we can just for a moment, stop and be thankful for what we have and not bitter for what we don't, the world seems a bit better place. Our younger set could learn a lesson from your words my friend, as well as a few of the older, spoiled ones I know.
Curt
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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In the midst of the hustle and bustle of our lives, if we can just for a moment, stop and be thankful for what we have and not bitter for what we don't, the world seems a bit better place. Our younger set could learn a lesson from your words my friend, as well as a few of the older, spoiled ones I know.
Curt
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Curt - yes, it's something for all of us to remember, isn't it? We make the everyday nonsense far too real sometimes.
:)Sharyn
Comment from terry drake
I'm glad your happy. I can tell you are from your writing style and clarity. You have a nice approach to the subject and I enjoyed the presentation.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I'm glad your happy. I can tell you are from your writing style and clarity. You have a nice approach to the subject and I enjoyed the presentation.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Bless you Terry! :)Sharyn
Comment from JM daSilva
You are certainly are pantheist. I'm kind of a pantheist too. I love to look at nature in all its beauty and ugliness. Discovery Channel and National Geography are on all the time here. Great poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You are certainly are pantheist. I'm kind of a pantheist too. I love to look at nature in all its beauty and ugliness. Discovery Channel and National Geography are on all the time here. Great poem.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Absolutely! Much more convenient, too, than going into a stuffy old church I think JM. :)S
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That's it. I think the same.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You speak words of wisdom in this lovely poem. Yes, we should all take a moment and appreciate all that God has provided for us.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You speak words of wisdom in this lovely poem. Yes, we should all take a moment and appreciate all that God has provided for us.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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bless you barbara - thank you so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A lovely poem with beautiful, colorful descriptions. Great read aloud. So much joy makes this a delight to read. Blue is my favorite color, so really loved all of the shades~Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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A lovely poem with beautiful, colorful descriptions. Great read aloud. So much joy makes this a delight to read. Blue is my favorite color, so really loved all of the shades~Debbie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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thanks so much Debbie - how ARE you? :)S
