Pinky Swear
An Octogrammic UnderCoverfest...46 total reviews
Comment from Dougspoetry
I have to start by saying, I love the glasses in your new profile pic. They make you look very studious. I promise, no pinky swear, I mean cross my heart. Just kidding around they look great! Love the poem! Your creative genius shines through. Hope all is well. :)
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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I have to start by saying, I love the glasses in your new profile pic. They make you look very studious. I promise, no pinky swear, I mean cross my heart. Just kidding around they look great! Love the poem! Your creative genius shines through. Hope all is well. :)
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Haha thanks Douglas, I was hoping for the more intelligent look. LOL They are only for reading though so I only look intelligent and studious SOME of the time. LOL
Thanks for the sixer...sorry for the tardy reply...so darn busy at the moment.
Cheers P
xoxo
Comment from Sally Carter
Nice job Clopo. Sounds like those two little stars are still providing you with plenty of inspiration.
"Pinky swear" is a great line to work into an octogram. Which came first, I wonder, the phrase or the idea to write an octogram? Either way, it's cute and perfect for the form.
A pleasure to read, and I'll have to see if I can work "pinky swear" into a conversation somehow.
My best wishes to you,
Sal x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Nice job Clopo. Sounds like those two little stars are still providing you with plenty of inspiration.
"Pinky swear" is a great line to work into an octogram. Which came first, I wonder, the phrase or the idea to write an octogram? Either way, it's cute and perfect for the form.
A pleasure to read, and I'll have to see if I can work "pinky swear" into a conversation somehow.
My best wishes to you,
Sal x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Hey Sal, thanks so much
Most appreciate your review and I thought of the words first.
I have so much stashed I just let the line work itself into whatever form it wants...seems like "pinky" chose the "octo"...haha
Thanks again...
I hope to drop by soon...
Cheers Clopo
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Comment from katz meow
Wow! Pinky swear! Haven't heard, or seen that for a long time. I'll have to do it with my girl friend the next time we are talking about private stuff. Besides being cute and funny, this poem has great structure, form, rhyme, and flow. Good job at writing this one my friend...Katz
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Wow! Pinky swear! Haven't heard, or seen that for a long time. I'll have to do it with my girl friend the next time we are talking about private stuff. Besides being cute and funny, this poem has great structure, form, rhyme, and flow. Good job at writing this one my friend...Katz
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Many thanks for your thoughtful review katz.
Cheers Closet
Comment from Frankeddy
Hi: I wasn't familiar with the pinky swear phrase but you did a great job of explaining it and the good picture made it clear.
I love your foot notes, I keep learning and learning.
Keep up the great work. Ed
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Hi: I wasn't familiar with the pinky swear phrase but you did a great job of explaining it and the good picture made it clear.
I love your foot notes, I keep learning and learning.
Keep up the great work. Ed
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Haha thanks Ed...not everyone is familiar with this phrase I am finding out.
I thought everyone had "pinkies"...LOL
Cheers P
Comment from Indie Skreet
sublime rhyme and great rhythm too. thoroughly enjoyed this witty read. Not deflecting from the rest, but I particularly love the last stanza. best Indie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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sublime rhyme and great rhythm too. thoroughly enjoyed this witty read. Not deflecting from the rest, but I particularly love the last stanza. best Indie
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Many thanks Indie. Most appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers Closet
Comment from Bellringer
Closet, excellent display of craft in your humorous poem. Ah, the "pinky swear" that leads into the adult version of "Hey, can you keep a secret?" Its an uncommon thing for folks to truly keep a secret! Regards, Hector
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Closet, excellent display of craft in your humorous poem. Ah, the "pinky swear" that leads into the adult version of "Hey, can you keep a secret?" Its an uncommon thing for folks to truly keep a secret! Regards, Hector
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Haha hey Hector, yes I can but when I was little NOPE not a chance. I use to always spill the beans on what the brothers were getting for their birthdays...haha
Cheers and thanks so much
Closet xo
PS Hope you are keeping well these days.
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You're welcome, Closet. Just got back to F/S after a brief illness. Doing OK now. Blessings, Hector
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Good to know buddy.
Take care.
Cheers P
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Comment from sgalletti
It's so great seeing you post. I love the term "pinky swear" myself LOL! I actually use it on occasion. I used it a lot more when I was younger :). Good octogram modification. It's a tough form to write. How you doing??? Hugs, Sue
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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It's so great seeing you post. I love the term "pinky swear" myself LOL! I actually use it on occasion. I used it a lot more when I was younger :). Good octogram modification. It's a tough form to write. How you doing??? Hugs, Sue
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Many thanks Sue...I love the Octo, its one of my pet formats and I reckon it just rocks. I'm doin' fine. Darn busy and its just getting worse but I'm hangin' in there.
Cheers Phillippa
xo
Comment from rhymelord
A truly outstanding Octogram. It has all of the punchy metre, beautifully executed, that this format needs and the punch line is a delight, along with the rest of the vernacular. LOVE IT.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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A truly outstanding Octogram. It has all of the punchy metre, beautifully executed, that this format needs and the punch line is a delight, along with the rest of the vernacular. LOVE IT.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Hi Reg, thanks for the outstanding review, much appreciate your sixer and delightful analysis.
Sterling!
Cheers P
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Comment from Righteous Riter
The message is clear and to the point. The writer does a good job of defining the term pinky swear. The writer grabs the attention of the reader from the beginning and holds it to the end. I like this. Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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The message is clear and to the point. The writer does a good job of defining the term pinky swear. The writer grabs the attention of the reader from the beginning and holds it to the end. I like this. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much RR, I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers Closet
Comment from fluffnstuff
well long time no talka to...and what a mag. poem this is...rhyming is perfect, and how you came up with the subject matter is something else. you deserve every award you can get on this one! fluff
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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well long time no talka to...and what a mag. poem this is...rhyming is perfect, and how you came up with the subject matter is something else. you deserve every award you can get on this one! fluff
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Haha many thanks for your sixer review fluffy...much appreciated and thanks for dropping by.
Cheers closet
xo
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ur welcome
