Little Poems
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Comment from sunnilicious
Well that's bright. Excellent 5-7-5 poem. Concrete vivid imagery created. Good author notes. And so true too. Excellent!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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Well that's bright. Excellent 5-7-5 poem. Concrete vivid imagery created. Good author notes. And so true too. Excellent!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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Thanks sunnilicious.
Comment from MelReyn
I think God is trying to tell me something. First my preacher talks about trials and tribulations and that we should find joy in them. (Silver lining) Then I see it as a reoccurring theme in all that I read on Fanstory in the week since, including yours. I'd better buckle my seat belt and get ready for turbulence. But as you point out, once the storm passes there is a rainbow with a pot of gold.
Then again, perhaps I am sensitive and only noticing all that because of the sermon. ;) Great work!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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I think God is trying to tell me something. First my preacher talks about trials and tribulations and that we should find joy in them. (Silver lining) Then I see it as a reoccurring theme in all that I read on Fanstory in the week since, including yours. I'd better buckle my seat belt and get ready for turbulence. But as you point out, once the storm passes there is a rainbow with a pot of gold.
Then again, perhaps I am sensitive and only noticing all that because of the sermon. ;) Great work!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thank you Melreyn. I'd say buckle down, there's always a storm coming.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A perfectly told and visually projected stand of storm before the rainbow and the poet wishes a rainfall for further prosperity and growth in the land and people with pot of gold, nice work with images and visuals.
ALCREATOR LITTERATEUR
06-43344 R-Fri Mar 01, 2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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A perfectly told and visually projected stand of storm before the rainbow and the poet wishes a rainfall for further prosperity and growth in the land and people with pot of gold, nice work with images and visuals.
ALCREATOR LITTERATEUR
06-43344 R-Fri Mar 01, 2013
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thank you Alcreator.
