From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Calling All Poets"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Vance
2nd review
As you see reading your past posted poems.
I was so surprised to see you added my my addition to your wonderful poem Calling all Poets
Gert
How nice of you to call all us poets to read your encouraging thought here is my addition-
Let us weave all our thoughts together
each are of various hues,
let our thoughts entwine with one another
in one great tapestry ~
Let us weave our creative thoughts
as we play our own melody
each thought is a tuneful key,
so we all can play in harmony
one great symphony.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Smiles to you Vance
2nd review
As you see reading your past posted poems.
I was so surprised to see you added my my addition to your wonderful poem Calling all Poets
Gert
How nice of you to call all us poets to read your encouraging thought here is my addition-
Let us weave all our thoughts together
each are of various hues,
let our thoughts entwine with one another
in one great tapestry ~
Let us weave our creative thoughts
as we play our own melody
each thought is a tuneful key,
so we all can play in harmony
one great symphony.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Wow:!Gert that is fantastic! Can we melt these together, re-post and jointly copyright/publish??? I't soooo much better. Let me know....Vance
Smiles Vance,
Fine with me, how would we --
melt these together, re-post and jointly?
Ask Tom here on FS?
Gert
Comment from Lobengula
Another lovely poem, Vance. Written with your usual elan and wisdom. I find I receive an enormous 'kick' when I've managed to finish a poem, and I'm sure you're the same. Well, I know you are by the tone of the piece. Very well done,
Every good wish, Mike.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Another lovely poem, Vance. Written with your usual elan and wisdom. I find I receive an enormous 'kick' when I've managed to finish a poem, and I'm sure you're the same. Well, I know you are by the tone of the piece. Very well done,
Every good wish, Mike.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Mike Thanks as always...I'm delighted that this had meaning for you and it's always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessings: Vance
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It was my pleasure
Every good wish, Mike
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well I'm not a poet but I do believe poets have an awesome gift and calling from God. You all just see things different and are blessed to allow the rest of us to see it through your words. Wow, that was a mouth full. Great piece. God loves you and I do too. I tried my first ABC poem. I didn't even know such a thing existed until I started reviewing about 3 weeks ago. But, then I'm 86 and been out of school for 73 years. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Well I'm not a poet but I do believe poets have an awesome gift and calling from God. You all just see things different and are blessed to allow the rest of us to see it through your words. Wow, that was a mouth full. Great piece. God loves you and I do too. I tried my first ABC poem. I didn't even know such a thing existed until I started reviewing about 3 weeks ago. But, then I'm 86 and been out of school for 73 years. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Dear Evelyn: So nice to meet you and I truly appreciate your kind words and inspiration. It's always a pleasure to get reviews from those with "tenure" and "wisddom" that goes with it! Blessings and please don't be a stranger! Vance
Comment from beccabootie123
really nice like everything about it. the color palate the picture is awesome it reads easy like the theme calling everyone in to do what we do as poets. thank you great write
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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really nice like everything about it. the color palate the picture is awesome it reads easy like the theme calling everyone in to do what we do as poets. thank you great write
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Becca: nice to hear from you again and thanks so much for your meaningful feedback and gracious rating. Stay tuned!! Blessing to you, Vance
