Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Morning Coffee"Small and Specialty Poems
7 total reviews
Comment from Robin Gilmor
The man loves his coffee. I can't drink my husbands. He brews it too strong for my taste. Lovely write, well organized with a clear message and easy flow.
Lovely picture I could almost taste the coffee. Robin :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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The man loves his coffee. I can't drink my husbands. He brews it too strong for my taste. Lovely write, well organized with a clear message and easy flow.
Lovely picture I could almost taste the coffee. Robin :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks Robin. I was delicious.
Comment from sunnilicious
Wonderful nonet poem. You can make a coffee lover out of anyone. You even managed rhyme and rhythm. Lyrical flow too. Great!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Wonderful nonet poem. You can make a coffee lover out of anyone. You even managed rhyme and rhythm. Lyrical flow too. Great!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks sunnilicious. You spotted everything.
Comment from Gungalo
A fine Nonet Treischel and great rhythm. You took a great picture to accompany this one too. Well, aren't you going to invite me in to share? Great write.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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A fine Nonet Treischel and great rhythm. You took a great picture to accompany this one too. Well, aren't you going to invite me in to share? Great write.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. You always welcome. To share a cup.
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Thanks Treischel.
Comment from mshirachot
Coffee does seem to be the kick-start of choice for most folks. Since I have gotten into green or herbal teas, I find I am not dealing with grogginess in the morning and the jitters at night, both of which I had after drinking several cups of coffee during the day for many years.
Your "fifth" line actually has six syllables. I did not take away points from you for that as I knew you would fix it...and then it would be a perfect entry. Best wishes for the contest!
Blessings!
Marsha
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Coffee does seem to be the kick-start of choice for most folks. Since I have gotten into green or herbal teas, I find I am not dealing with grogginess in the morning and the jitters at night, both of which I had after drinking several cups of coffee during the day for many years.
Your "fifth" line actually has six syllables. I did not take away points from you for that as I knew you would fix it...and then it would be a perfect entry. Best wishes for the contest!
Blessings!
Marsha
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Yup, fixed it. Thank you Marsha.
Comment from Toney
Wow! I really loved your poem and most especially the way you brought forth your theme. I am kind of new here, so reading your poem gave me so much inspiration. Impressive!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Wow! I really loved your poem and most especially the way you brought forth your theme. I am kind of new here, so reading your poem gave me so much inspiration. Impressive!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you Toney for the wonderful review, and welcome to the site. Hope you find enjoyment here.
Comment from Cherokee messenger
Great work... I could not agree more with the thought and the writing works perfectly. I love the fact that you included you own photograph.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Great work... I could not agree more with the thought and the writing works perfectly. I love the fact that you included you own photograph.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much Valerie. I am humbled by this fabulous review and such a high rating. Wasn't expecting that!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellently written nonet, Treischel, and you have made it rhyme, not easy with a nonet. It's very well worked out, each line flows nicely and is just a lovely contest entry. Good luck! xsx Sandra
My royalties are being sorted as we speak, I should know very soon. :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Excellently written nonet, Treischel, and you have made it rhyme, not easy with a nonet. It's very well worked out, each line flows nicely and is just a lovely contest entry. Good luck! xsx Sandra
My royalties are being sorted as we speak, I should know very soon. :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you Sandra. May you be showered with riches!
