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Stars are like glitter on the background of the dark sky
4 total reviews
Comment from
Akira Mana
I really like this Haiku, i think its very carefully thought through. I really hope to see more of your work in the future. ;) ~Akira
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
Thanks Akira,
I I will try and keep updating my work :D
Comment from
nankins
I like the depth in your title.Very positive. Simple words yet carry a great impact on the reader. It's amazing that you are only 14. Good luck for your future endeavors:-)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
Thank you for your support!
Comment from
barkingdog
I like the way you describe the stars. They do look like glitter.
You have a nice flow of 's' consonance in your second line. Your syllable count is perfect in this 5/7/5/.
Good luck in the contest and keep up the good work, cmaatouk.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
Thank you for your feedback :D
Comment from
garrymc5
Awesome space, and light, and time. Start from the horizon, from things you know and don't know. See what happens. See what words you find.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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