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Comment from PoeticXscape
I didn't quite understand it. From what I gather it looks like you are blaming the clips fro deaths? Man is to blame and they have a choice. The ones serving in the army that kill have made the wrong one and have no right to be called hero.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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I didn't quite understand it. From what I gather it looks like you are blaming the clips fro deaths? Man is to blame and they have a choice. The ones serving in the army that kill have made the wrong one and have no right to be called hero.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Ok, Again we don't connect.
Comment from trimple
I find it very odd to think that any house hold is allowed to carry a gun.
I visited the U.S.A a few years ago and found the place terrifying. Thank gawd they are against the law here in the UK.
I assume that your laws are trying to introduce automatic weapons? or take them away? I don't know the laws out there in gun slingers land, other than everyone seems to have em. Ban all guns I say.
an interesting poem Tom, a clip is a long round of ammo ?
Kind regards Trimple
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I find it very odd to think that any house hold is allowed to carry a gun.
I visited the U.S.A a few years ago and found the place terrifying. Thank gawd they are against the law here in the UK.
I assume that your laws are trying to introduce automatic weapons? or take them away? I don't know the laws out there in gun slingers land, other than everyone seems to have em. Ban all guns I say.
an interesting poem Tom, a clip is a long round of ammo ?
Kind regards Trimple
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Yes. A long round. Trying to outlaw them. Not likely, but at least I hope the outlaw the clips.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Short message with a great message and a lot of punch. I enjoyed the connection of clip. The picture adds definition to your already perfect write.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Short message with a great message and a lot of punch. I enjoyed the connection of clip. The picture adds definition to your already perfect write.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you Robin. Glad you liked this Naani. I. Lowness away by the fabulous rating!
Comment from vapros
Four stars today for a commentary on one of today's hottest topics, satisfying the ground rules for a Naani verse. I might question the final word therein. Do automatic weapons 'apply'? Perhaps they do, in some way. I'm in agreement with your author's note. Well said.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Four stars today for a commentary on one of today's hottest topics, satisfying the ground rules for a Naani verse. I might question the final word therein. Do automatic weapons 'apply'? Perhaps they do, in some way. I'm in agreement with your author's note. Well said.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Ok, thanks for the review, Vapos.
Comment from linsbm
Speaking of weapons, top on the list will be guns, and how scary it would be to think of automatic weapons. Dangerous not to human life.
Very brief but speaks volumes in this write. You hit the ball, and that it!
Excellent write as per the contest entry - syllable wise, content and delivery. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Speaking of weapons, top on the list will be guns, and how scary it would be to think of automatic weapons. Dangerous not to human life.
Very brief but speaks volumes in this write. You hit the ball, and that it!
Excellent write as per the contest entry - syllable wise, content and delivery. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Thank you linsbm.
Comment from Gungalo
when security is based on guns
human life
goes at fast clip
as automatic weapons apply
This is such a great Naani Treischel. You have given the best reason possible for having a really strict gun law.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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when security is based on guns
human life
goes at fast clip
as automatic weapons apply
This is such a great Naani Treischel. You have given the best reason possible for having a really strict gun law.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. Hope they pass one.
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Me too.
