Comment from Gregory K Shipman

Excellent

Whatever the subject of your essay, you get to it with little left to ponder... you are precise, literate and fact based. In this one (like others in the past) your passion comes through without beating one over the head with it. Your words have calm reason and direct emphasis.

Wounded Warriors should be a passion of us all... Soldiers live and die during war... those who live are most fortunate but many have lives that are nightmarish due to what they must go through in war and what they must go through post-war...

I give you all my praise for an excellent essay and an excellent write...

greg

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Thank you Greg, as always for a most thoughtful review. I also continue to appreciate your personal commentary, which always adds perspective to the point of view I am attempting to make.

reply by Gregory K Shipman on 16-Feb-2013

If I could correct one thing, Marisa... you say point of view you're attaempting to make... I doubt if 'attempt' should be there... yuo make your point of view!

Comment from Axiom Gray

Excellent

This story really sounds amazing. I enjoyed myself the whole way through. The word choice is sound, and the flow of the language was smooth throughout. Well done!

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Thanks for the read, glad you liked the piece.