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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Well introduced. The humor and verse is completely well presented. Try Benodrl at night. A really good sleep. Enjoyable verse. than you for sharing
your read. Robin :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
Well introduced. The humor and verse is completely well presented. Try Benodrl at night. A really good sleep. Enjoyable verse. than you for sharing
your read. Robin :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks Robin.
Comment from Johnny-artist
Wow! Treischel +way cool~I'm glad to have come across such a casual and humorous read...giving me an idea.
Now~the serious portion of "Last Dose"...getting into an accident...concerns from having good times. How about securing such party interests~calling up an agency...bringing one to the appropriate destination etc.
Thanks Treis for sharing. uncleJohn
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
Wow! Treischel +way cool~I'm glad to have come across such a casual and humorous read...giving me an idea.
Now~the serious portion of "Last Dose"...getting into an accident...concerns from having good times. How about securing such party interests~calling up an agency...bringing one to the appropriate destination etc.
Thanks Treis for sharing. uncleJohn
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks uncle John. Sounds like I stimulated your Muse.
Comment from mystery poet
Gosh did Nemo hit your area last night.
Been seeing some heavy snow falls in
the northeast...Sorry to hear you're
sick...Take the NyQuil and hibernate
your way through the winter snow storms.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
Gosh did Nemo hit your area last night.
Been seeing some heavy snow falls in
the northeast...Sorry to hear you're
sick...Take the NyQuil and hibernate
your way through the winter snow storms.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Thanks mystery. Will do.
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Good!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so rotten, when you feel like that and can't sleep it makes you feel worse. Best wrap up really warm if you are going out. You have really captured in words, the feelings we all have when the flu takes a hold. I hope you feel better soon. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
That is so rotten, when you feel like that and can't sleep it makes you feel worse. Best wrap up really warm if you are going out. You have really captured in words, the feelings we all have when the flu takes a hold. I hope you feel better soon. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Thank you Sandra. Seems to be moving from my head to my chest today.
Comment from Joannforsberg
Life has similar situations for people. Last night my daughter, age 22 took the last dose of NyQuil earlier in day. She so needed some more but too sick to go get it. So sent a sibling for her, yet no one wanted to be the one to go. Hope you feel better today. I so enjoy reading your poetry and look forward to see in your name on my list of poems to review. Jo
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
Life has similar situations for people. Last night my daughter, age 22 took the last dose of NyQuil earlier in day. She so needed some more but too sick to go get it. So sent a sibling for her, yet no one wanted to be the one to go. Hope you feel better today. I so enjoy reading your poetry and look forward to see in your name on my list of poems to review. Jo
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Thank you Jo. It is a small world.
Comment from judelesemann
You've done it again you devil, you. I vthis one. Terrible coming off a Nyquil high isn't it!!! Keep on writing these so I can keep on reading 'em. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
You've done it again you devil, you. I vthis one. Terrible coming off a Nyquil high isn't it!!! Keep on writing these so I can keep on reading 'em. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thank you Jude.
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Comment from sunnilicious
I think everyone can sympathize with you about this... Flu-fevers-cold season can bring some unexpected drama. Sorry to hear about sniffles. Feel better.
Good poem.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
I think everyone can sympathize with you about this... Flu-fevers-cold season can bring some unexpected drama. Sorry to hear about sniffles. Feel better.
Good poem.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious.
Comment from Flamingbush
That NyQuil sounds addictive; nice rollicking beat to this poem. That "Dang!" is like a spoke in a wheel. Round and round it goes, back to that last dose of NyQuil. Sounds like you need a nice fire in your house, with plenty of tea to keep you warm.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
That NyQuil sounds addictive; nice rollicking beat to this poem. That "Dang!" is like a spoke in a wheel. Round and round it goes, back to that last dose of NyQuil. Sounds like you need a nice fire in your house, with plenty of tea to keep you warm.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Sounds wonderful. Thanks Flamingbush.
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You're welcome. Have a great evening.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I hope you are feeling better today. I'm new on this site and 86 years old to boot. I hope to do this right. I'm not a poet but I know what I like and I like this. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
I hope you are feeling better today. I'm new on this site and 86 years old to boot. I hope to do this right. I'm not a poet but I know what I like and I like this. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much Evelyn. Welcome to the site. Your doing just fine. Hope you like it here.
Comment from Gungalo
Dang ... you did good if you slept through a 16 hour snowstorm guy!!! LOL I guess Nyquil is the way to go eh? Hehe a perfect answer to the perfect storm.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
Dang ... you did good if you slept through a 16 hour snowstorm guy!!! LOL I guess Nyquil is the way to go eh? Hehe a perfect answer to the perfect storm.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks, groan.
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LOL.