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the aftermath

A new love followed by a gym workout

2 total reviews 
Comment from terry drake
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You have interpreted the 5-7-5 verse format to mean the number of words on each line. The challenge is to count syllables on each line as a meter count. 5 on lines one and three with seven syllables on the second line.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
    Thank you for that very good explanation
Comment from angelmagnet
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Totally Expressive. A little too much information for my taste, but well done. Very true to life. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
    Thank you for your comment