Vampire night
A poem, no rhyme or meter29 total reviews
Comment from amarherig14
This is a very scary dream.Excellent,imagery and wording. The presentation is great. They belong to the night: "Let the chase begin."
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This is a very scary dream.Excellent,imagery and wording. The presentation is great. They belong to the night: "Let the chase begin."
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
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You are welcome,Ine. You too ,enjoy your Sunday. Margie
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
What a surprise to read a poem like this from you.
It truly blew my mind. Yet thats what good writers dop. alway venture into something new.
I give you six star not only because this is a good write Because you dare to try something new.It fun to get out of that safety zone. Thank you for sharing.
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Wow!
What a surprise to read a poem like this from you.
It truly blew my mind. Yet thats what good writers dop. alway venture into something new.
I give you six star not only because this is a good write Because you dare to try something new.It fun to get out of that safety zone. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. Thanks so much for this gorgeous six.
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You are very welcome, May youand yours havea blessed Sunday to.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The message in this piece is clear and understandable. The words bring the photo to life. This piece flows well as the writers passion can be felt. This piece grabbed my attention from beginning to end as it took my mind where it needed to go. Good job.
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The message in this piece is clear and understandable. The words bring the photo to life. This piece flows well as the writers passion can be felt. This piece grabbed my attention from beginning to end as it took my mind where it needed to go. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
Comment from October21
Loving the topic here Ine. It's very different and dark for your usual writes. Always good to experiment with new things in poetry. I liked the theme of forbidden love and yet that urge to be together with a passion despite the different humanities. Brilliant work as always. Their long for each other is strong and something binds them together. Love.
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Loving the topic here Ine. It's very different and dark for your usual writes. Always good to experiment with new things in poetry. I liked the theme of forbidden love and yet that urge to be together with a passion despite the different humanities. Brilliant work as always. Their long for each other is strong and something binds them together. Love.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
Comment from clbritch
This is a truly good read. It is entertaining and kept my attention from start to finish. Good descriptive wording and I love your picture choice.
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This is a truly good read. It is entertaining and kept my attention from start to finish. Good descriptive wording and I love your picture choice.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
Comment from fionageorge
A new subject for you... and an interesting one at that, Ine. Macabre, and implied very sexy too! Mmmm, a lot of food for thought! Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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A new subject for you... and an interesting one at that, Ine. Macabre, and implied very sexy too! Mmmm, a lot of food for thought! Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. Nice to see you again, Marijke. Hugs, Ine
Comment from c_lucas
I like the color arragengment of red on black. You draw your reader into your poetic tale into the blackest of nights. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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I like the color arragengment of red on black. You draw your reader into your poetic tale into the blackest of nights. This is very well written.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
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You're welcome, Robina. Charlie
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Thanks, Charlie
Comment from chasennov
'Vampire Night.' yes, I thought it was a first for you Ine. But the poem was well formulated and very well structured and rounded to encompass a strong extension to the narrative.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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'Vampire Night.' yes, I thought it was a first for you Ine. But the poem was well formulated and very well structured and rounded to encompass a strong extension to the narrative.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.
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You too, Ine.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow! Ine, I have never read one of these from you before! This was amazing. Chilling and full of lust and, well so different! I really enjoyed it! You should write more of these. xsx Sandra
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Wow! Ine, I have never read one of these from you before! This was amazing. Chilling and full of lust and, well so different! I really enjoyed it! You should write more of these. xsx Sandra
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. I don't know, a bit too scary:)
