Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

...together we shall embrace the night
and share frightful pleasures for all of eternity....


My, this is a dark poem, so different for you, Ine..
very well presented, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Where did that come from? Someone steal your breakfast? LOL
It certainly is a new subject for you and it did surprise me! Not my bag but you aced it Ine! Good job. Nancy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.

Comment from Warren Rodgers

Excellent

Our dreams can certainly provide an escape from the sometimes mundane waking hours and your poem takes the reader into that dark world that awaits a willing participant. I like the tone entire tone of your poem with well chosen words and phrases like "share frightful pleasures for all of eternity". Nice to see you stretch the limits of your comfort zone. Well done.
All the best, Rodger

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.

Comment from words

Excellent

You have captured well the essence of True BLood here:

...And the Vampire
Who has been penetrating my thoughts,
..raping my dreams and chilling my soul..

Our hunger expands our ~Darkest Eden~
with every second of our appetite for it..
And what we build there now..
Will Stand..
Forever.. Frozen in Time....

I haven't seen the show in a while, but I remember being captivated by it.

Hugs, d

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is very well written my friend and for you it is totally different I must say you brought this to life with feeling and imagery it reads very well regards Jill

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine.

Comment from reconciled

Exceptional

Romancing the garlic huh sis? My God...thats scary love girl "frightful pleasures" do tell?....what do you mean by that.....in detail. Man...are you in trouble...wait till I tell mom..lol -smile- love you Michael

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. Thank so much little brother. I love this gorgeous six. And Mom is very dead:)

reply by reconciled on 10-Feb-2013

I'm gonna tell her ...you said that -smile-

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Difficult as hse is dead as stone-LOL

reply by reconciled on 10-Feb-2013

you better stop....your already in enough trouble.......shww your out of control sis....slow down...woooo nelly wooo lol

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Maybe:)

Comment from beccabootie123

Exceptional

wow this is wonderful the picture the formatting the colors all lead to potent impact. like vampires do you? excellent work. now I feel stupid for the comments I made on your other work. my mistake. call em as you see em. great poster this.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. Thanks so much Becca for this very generous rating. I truly love sixes and this got quite a few:) But I don't do many scary ones. Scares me too much:)

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

Hi, ine. this is so powerful I'm going with 6 stars. This has some marvelous lines like "raping my dreams and chilling my soul" and "darkest Eden" and "night dream lover." The emotion really comes through in this, and you give the feeling of being under the vampire's spell. The passion is so all-consuming you describe it as madness. Love your last line "Let the chase begin." judi

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. Thanks so much for liking it and the very high rating. It is the fourth six it got. Over the moon. You made my day.

reply by judiverse on 10-Feb-2013

You're so welcome. I forgot to mention that you want to use the spelling sheer instead of shear. Sheer meaning direct, outright. Shear meaning to cut. judi

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for the tip. I will change.

reply by judiverse on 10-Feb-2013

You are welcome. This is really a powerful poem. You're really breaking out with your free verse work. judi

Comment from Galactia

Exceptional

That is such a wonderful free verse, love the descriptive words used to express your ideas of vampires.

Favourite stanza is...

...And the Vampire
Who has been penetrating my thoughts,
..raping my dreams and chilling my soul..

and...

.....oh, night-dream lover........
....I ache for your kiss ......
....take from me all that I have....
....all that I am...
.....drink from me.....

...together we shall embrace the night
and share frightful pleasures for all of eternity....


I thopught the ending was funny too with (Let the chase begin .. )

What a great write you brought a mile on my face. Love the pic. of courde. I'm a big TRUE BLOOD fsn :))

great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. THanks so much for this enormous high rating, Tia.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Wow, Ine where does that comes from? I love it.
I love dark poetry and this is a well expressed and good formulated one.. and the words are so well chosen!!
Great job. Fia

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday , Ine. I will tell you some time:) Thanks for the gorgeous six.