Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Ine, After seeing the Twilight saga and wouldn't mind having a vampire of my own. Sorry it won't like me give this a six. very well written. Like the feel of this one. Luff ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine. A virtual one is OK as well:)

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

Okay. In my opinion, this is one of the best you've ever done. Wow, Ine. Fantastic free verse. You have captured the atmosphere perfectly in my opinion, and what a fantastic use of words. Really powerful and well done.

My only criticism would be the use of all those ellipses. Not keen personally. I think the words work fine without all those dots.

Great job. Take a bow.

Av

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine. Thanks, you gave me the so many-est six. It got so many. But this is the first today and made my day once more.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

You did well with this write. It was dark and chilling. Some may embrace but I saw away from me. Artwork and color scheme work well with the words.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Nicely written poem and accompained photo. Good progression, rhythm and flow for a good read. Clever wording too. Thanks for sharing, Deb

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Great poem, I didn't know if I should be scared
or happy. Since I'm afraid of vampires I would
look at it from the distance.

Well written poem it was fun to read it, it made
me smile.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine. I am scared of them:)

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

ooo scary picture and a poem that has the hairs on the back of my neck standing up fabulously well written poem thank you gazzagodbod

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Ine - This is a great poem. The picture is too and red against black really shows up your words. I enjoyed you "new subject" work. You're sure good at writing poetry. Kat

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from mystery poet

Excellent

The art and black/red presentation are perfect
for a vampire piece. I like the way you cleverly
crafted your poem. The reader was allowed tidbits
of images to consume and drink of along the way.
"Let the chase begin", not an ending but the start
of a night in the life of a vampire.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

reply by mystery poet on 11-Feb-2013

And you, too! It's a great pleasure
to comment and rate...

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for the compliment.

reply by mystery poet on 11-Feb-2013

My pleasure!!!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am not into the horror genre or vampires, but your free verse has good energy and imagery, and your picture selection and presentation are a perfect match. Your "darkest Eden" metaphor is quite effective. Chills- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from MumEsGirl

Excellent

Quite an unusual style for you Ine. Great work with vivid images of flirting with danger and yet having a good time.

The entire layout added impact to your poem from the start
hugs
kate

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week , Ine