Out of My Shell
I'm Coming...41 total reviews
Comment from prayingpoet
Oh dear, glad I was not eating anything while reading this! I enjoyed your notes almost as much as the poem itself! Great word pictures because I can actually "smell" that little guy right through the computer screen!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Oh dear, glad I was not eating anything while reading this! I enjoyed your notes almost as much as the poem itself! Great word pictures because I can actually "smell" that little guy right through the computer screen!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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LOL Thanks for a delightful review.
Cheers P
Comment from NadineM
I loved this well-written poem about your forgotten crayfish. Great rhymes, very vivid imagery and I could almost smell that oozing bag of slop! Ewwww.... haha.. And I loved Mr.Crayfish's deep, intense emotions!
You told quite a story. Ever notice that sometimes our best and funniest stories are TRUE??!!
Great writing. Very much enjoyed this! Could've been a contest winner, had there been a contest.
Thanks for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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I loved this well-written poem about your forgotten crayfish. Great rhymes, very vivid imagery and I could almost smell that oozing bag of slop! Ewwww.... haha.. And I loved Mr.Crayfish's deep, intense emotions!
You told quite a story. Ever notice that sometimes our best and funniest stories are TRUE??!!
Great writing. Very much enjoyed this! Could've been a contest winner, had there been a contest.
Thanks for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Wow thanks for the super review and sixer to match.
Glad you liked a mushy story...
Many thanks...I looked for a contest but to be honest Stinkbomb didn't fit into ANY category! LMAO
Never mind...loved your review...Choice!
Cheers and thanks again
Phillippa
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, closetpoetjester, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the smelly crayfish that let you know of its existence. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, closetpoetjester, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the smelly crayfish that let you know of its existence. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Wow jaxy, thanks a big bundle from down under. Glad you enjoyed this smelly stench.
It sure existed on its scent for awhile after! LMAO
Cheers P
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PS Really appreciate the sixer my friend.
Comment from despiser
Poor thing. Well I would have eaten you :)
You do a great job mimicking a crayfish. Temperamental, shell fish. Nobody would suspect its written by a Bunny Wabbit hahaha
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Poor thing. Well I would have eaten you :)
You do a great job mimicking a crayfish. Temperamental, shell fish. Nobody would suspect its written by a Bunny Wabbit hahaha
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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What the f? You would have eaten a stinky old slushy cray?
Jesus DEE! LOL
What the f? Oh you mean Wabbity Wabbs? oh dats okay den.
I hear da rabbit is mighty fine eatin'.
Finger li...ahhh never mind.
I would have hopped off LONG before now.
==(:o-B)
Fankyou berry much
XXX
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Yep, it's a slippery slope as the colonel would say haha
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Slippery inDEEd.
*smirky*
Comment from oNray
See- here you go with another "fowl" poem. (LOL) this is another good, fun poem. I don't know how some of this stuff on site gets a four star and they get sixes- then this is fun with good rhyme and good story and where will it get you?
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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See- here you go with another "fowl" poem. (LOL) this is another good, fun poem. I don't know how some of this stuff on site gets a four star and they get sixes- then this is fun with good rhyme and good story and where will it get you?
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Haha...beaut review my friend and not sure this was about a chicken (fowl) haha but I get the drift.
Thanks for the bonus rating...I did actually get a four for this from one reviewer but I have to take the mediocre with the higher marks. It all evens itself out and with about 8 sixers already for this and the fact that it made it to top of the well received, well that little ol four just don't matter! Hahaha
Thanks, you've well and truly made my day. Have a great one yourself.
Cheers P
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Comment from Terra Dane
Some creative fun. It really is well written. A trivial little matter turned into a poetic gesture. The voice is maintained, the flow kept me going, as when I realized it seriously was about a crustacean in a bag, I almost abandoned it. Glad I stuck around--the wording kept me there.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Some creative fun. It really is well written. A trivial little matter turned into a poetic gesture. The voice is maintained, the flow kept me going, as when I realized it seriously was about a crustacean in a bag, I almost abandoned it. Glad I stuck around--the wording kept me there.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Many thanks. Yes I often write about trivial things.
I DON'T do fiction well or PHILOSOPHY.
So I stick with what I know and love and thats light hearted humour that hopefully strikes a chord with someone and is not bogged down with cryptic metaphors.
Too many poets get carried away with their own greatness leaving the reader in a state of bewilderment and confusion.
Glad you stuck around. The slushy also thanks you! LMAO
Cheers P
Comment from misscookie
This is a very funny poem to read. I'm sure many readers can relate with something like this forgeting to take the milk oput the cfar on hot August day.
Either was that poor crayfish never made it.
thanbk you foir sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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This is a very funny poem to read. I'm sure many readers can relate with something like this forgeting to take the milk oput the cfar on hot August day.
Either was that poor crayfish never made it.
thanbk you foir sharing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Thanks so much and it did seem as though many enjoyed and could relate.
Cheers and much appreciate the sterling review.
P
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You are very welcome, have a blessed week end.
Until next time.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Eeewww! Hahaha! What an adorable poem! (And what a horrid experience at Christmas! Yuk! LOL) your rhyme is marvelous, the cadence is great and the story from the POV of the crayfish is hilarious! A wonderful poem!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Eeewww! Hahaha! What an adorable poem! (And what a horrid experience at Christmas! Yuk! LOL) your rhyme is marvelous, the cadence is great and the story from the POV of the crayfish is hilarious! A wonderful poem!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Haha...thanks so much Dawn. Glad you enjoyed.
Your review was a gem and I appreciate it.
Cheers P
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It was entirely my pleasure! (Eeewww! LOL)
Comment from cvcopac
Cray's are good eatin', not like that though. Ugh. My favorite discription here is the second stanza of the second part. Sure, blame it on the booze. Clothes in the dryer--got'ta run, but, this verse is damn well done. Kenny
Site still has me restricted to excellent here.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Cray's are good eatin', not like that though. Ugh. My favorite discription here is the second stanza of the second part. Sure, blame it on the booze. Clothes in the dryer--got'ta run, but, this verse is damn well done. Kenny
Site still has me restricted to excellent here.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Thanks K...loved your review and glad you enjoyed this rank rant by the crustacean.
Cheers P
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PS I'll take excellent over poor! Haha LOL
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
lol... I love it. Would not change a thing... made me laugh, has great rhythm and flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it... keep up the sense of fun, there is too much heavy poetry out there. :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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lol... I love it. Would not change a thing... made me laugh, has great rhythm and flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it... keep up the sense of fun, there is too much heavy poetry out there. :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Wow thanks so much. I appreciate the sixer review and the fact you had a laugh. Thats my aim.
Have a great day, your sixer has made mine.
Cheers P
