In Fields Of Friendship
friends I can count on, I could count on one hand44 total reviews
Comment from poetic1988
Nice imagery throughout your poetry
In the midst of winter-white landscape canvas
Our friendship is a field
Of blazing scarlet poppies
A single star in a black sky
Shining bright enough
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Nice imagery throughout your poetry
In the midst of winter-white landscape canvas
Our friendship is a field
Of blazing scarlet poppies
A single star in a black sky
Shining bright enough
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from charlyann
Very lovely free verse, the imagery is lovely as is the sentiment, it flows nicely, good job on this and good luck in the contest
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Very lovely free verse, the imagery is lovely as is the sentiment, it flows nicely, good job on this and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from vapros
Good stuff, and I really liked it. Everyone should have such a friend and the talent to tell the world about it without making us roll our eyes. You have made me understand what you are feeling, and that's a gift. Best of luck with your gift and your friendship. Be well.
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Good stuff, and I really liked it. Everyone should have such a friend and the talent to tell the world about it without making us roll our eyes. You have made me understand what you are feeling, and that's a gift. Best of luck with your gift and your friendship. Be well.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from clbritch
Such a peaceful writing with a nice picture and background color. It is a nice read and your imagery is super. I like the style of this poem.
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Such a peaceful writing with a nice picture and background color. It is a nice read and your imagery is super. I like the style of this poem.
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
