In Fields Of Friendship
friends I can count on, I could count on one hand44 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
friendship as a field of blazing scarlet poppies in the midst of winter's canvas - this paints an effective portrait of true friendship. it should appear as a blaze of beauteous spring amidst desolate white.
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friendship as a field of blazing scarlet poppies in the midst of winter's canvas - this paints an effective portrait of true friendship. it should appear as a blaze of beauteous spring amidst desolate white.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is very well written with so much meaning enclosed in the words very beautiful imagery in the colorful descriptions well done on all aspects of the work regards Jill
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Hello my friend this is very well written with so much meaning enclosed in the words very beautiful imagery in the colorful descriptions well done on all aspects of the work regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from willowwaly
I like how you used a feild of poppies to convey the many individual aspects of friendship. I can't find any thing to fault about this poem. It's very good :)
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I like how you used a feild of poppies to convey the many individual aspects of friendship. I can't find any thing to fault about this poem. It's very good :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from artemis53
Lovely piece and impeccable presentation. This explanation is a wonderful description of the truest kind of friendship that comes around with rarity.
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Lovely piece and impeccable presentation. This explanation is a wonderful description of the truest kind of friendship that comes around with rarity.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from Treischel
A very upbeat and celebratory poem about friendship.a sweet metaphor is that comparison to a blazing field of poppies. Scarlet no less. Nice alliteration with: winter-white, circle of cheer, whisper of warmth, and single star. Your free verse flows smoothly. A very wonderful tribute to a friend.
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A very upbeat and celebratory poem about friendship.a sweet metaphor is that comparison to a blazing field of poppies. Scarlet no less. Nice alliteration with: winter-white, circle of cheer, whisper of warmth, and single star. Your free verse flows smoothly. A very wonderful tribute to a friend.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from Righteous Riter
Although this piece did not have any rhyming, the flow is good. The message in clean cut and clear. My attention is held from beginning to end. This piece speaks to my heart the phrase, A friend in need is a friend indeed. Good job.
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Although this piece did not have any rhyming, the flow is good. The message in clean cut and clear. My attention is held from beginning to end. This piece speaks to my heart the phrase, A friend in need is a friend indeed. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from muezza56
beautifully well written poem on friendship, and i loved the imagery created by the poppies and the accompanying pic was very well chosen.and that a special friendship should be unrequitted
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beautifully well written poem on friendship, and i loved the imagery created by the poppies and the accompanying pic was very well chosen.and that a special friendship should be unrequitted
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from Gregory K Shipman
An incredible visual metaphoric display of real friendship... for how else does true friendship show it's measure than by being where lesser things are not. My blazing scarlet poppy field has beat back the starkness of winter and stands tall in my view. I am here, it says, come hell or deep snow... freezing wind...hah!... take this whisper of warm embrace as the magic of true friendship...
Beautiful poem
greg
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An incredible visual metaphoric display of real friendship... for how else does true friendship show it's measure than by being where lesser things are not. My blazing scarlet poppy field has beat back the starkness of winter and stands tall in my view. I am here, it says, come hell or deep snow... freezing wind...hah!... take this whisper of warm embrace as the magic of true friendship...
Beautiful poem
greg
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is ultra-concise but profoundly meaningful--realistic and honest. The word "friendship" is thrown aroud WAY too casually, but your poem effectively tells how rare it is. Very good
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This poem is ultra-concise but profoundly meaningful--realistic and honest. The word "friendship" is thrown aroud WAY too casually, but your poem effectively tells how rare it is. Very good
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
Comment from White Feather
This is a nicely written poem. I particularly loved the ending "a single star in the black sky shining bright enough to guide me home." One small flicker of light can shine through all darkness. Well done.
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This is a nicely written poem. I particularly loved the ending "a single star in the black sky shining bright enough to guide me home." One small flicker of light can shine through all darkness. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
