In Fields Of Friendship
friends I can count on, I could count on one hand44 total reviews
Comment from Curt Mongold
The message that a friendship can be a shining beacon to follow out of the darkness is told so well in your words. The alliteration is just fantastic, and the analogies of winter feelings and scarlet poppies are excellent.
Best wishes,
Curt
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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The message that a friendship can be a shining beacon to follow out of the darkness is told so well in your words. The alliteration is just fantastic, and the analogies of winter feelings and scarlet poppies are excellent.
Best wishes,
Curt
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Hello Curt,
Thank you for embracing " in fields of friendship" so fully! I appreciate your elegantly penned, specific and generous impressions of my poem.
Your kudos and kind words translate encouragement, support and validation. What an amazing feeling that is!!
Thank you for addressing the metaphors and the alliteration in " in fields of friendship".
It will be a joy getting to know you through your poems. I am already your fan...
Until next time,
Jill
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Comment from Titanx9
Anyone fortunate enough to have a genuine friend who will stand by them, literally, through the good and the bad is lucky beyond measure. Your beautiful poem captures the spirit and reality of what true friendship is all about. Great job!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Anyone fortunate enough to have a genuine friend who will stand by them, literally, through the good and the bad is lucky beyond measure. Your beautiful poem captures the spirit and reality of what true friendship is all about. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Good afternoon Titanx9,
Thank you for embracing " in fields of friendship" so fully. As you may have guessed, this poem was written for a dear friend. Like you, I cherish and celebrate the blessing of precious friendships in my life.
I am delighted that you enjoyed reading " in fields of friendship" nearly as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Until next time,
Jill
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Comment from Doc Holiday
Those friends that you can count on one hand are the ones that you want to keep forever. You have described those people in your poem as your loving essentials with uniqueness and beauty. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Those friends that you can count on one hand are the ones that you want to keep forever. You have described those people in your poem as your loving essentials with uniqueness and beauty. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Hello my friend Doc Holiday,
It is always a pleasure to hear from you.
Thank you for embracing " in fields of friendship" so fully!
As you may have guessed, this poem was written for a dear friend. Like you, I cherish and celebrate the blessing of true and precious friendships.
Until next time,
Jill
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Comment from Bobbi22
Winter-white canvas - fresh fallen snow does appear as such. Very good use of metaphors to describe friendship. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Winter-white canvas - fresh fallen snow does appear as such. Very good use of metaphors to describe friendship. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Good afternoon RightPics,
Thank you for embracing " in fields of friendship" so fully! I appreciate that you mentioned my use of metaphors.
As you might have guessed, this poem was written for a dear friend. I cherish and celebrate the blessing of true and precious friendships.
I am delighted that you enjoyed reading my poem nearly as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Until next time,
Jill
-:)
Comment from mystery poet
I love the sentiments you encompass here in some
beautiful metaphors. In the midst of pure white
a field of poppies. A bright star in a black
night time sky to guide you home. Exceptional!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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I love the sentiments you encompass here in some
beautiful metaphors. In the midst of pure white
a field of poppies. A bright star in a black
night time sky to guide you home. Exceptional!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Good morning my friend,
Thank you for embracing " in fields of friendship" with such enthusiasm. This poem was written as a gift for a very dear friend. I have been rather surprised at the interest that it has garnered among my fan story friends.
It is always a joy to receive one of your elegantly penned reviews. You never fail to point out specific points which I find most helpful.
I continue to delight in every new poem of yours. I devour them!
Untill next time,
Jill
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Many thanks to you dear poet for these
great words of inspiration and I, of course
love reading your work and so enjoy giving
the best I can back on them. Hugs::}}
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of writing; a good tribute to friendship(I' m sure it refers to true friends). I like the metaphor of field as a description of friendship.
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This is a nice piece of writing; a good tribute to friendship(I' m sure it refers to true friends). I like the metaphor of field as a description of friendship.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from Tina McKala
perfect metaphor for friendship and its importance in our lives. who else can help us if not friends? you wrote it very well.
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perfect metaphor for friendship and its importance in our lives. who else can help us if not friends? you wrote it very well.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
An excellent free verse poem. Your comparison of friends you can count on, to a field of blazing scarlet poppies is great, and of course the accompanying pic was spot on. I felt that your words defined what 'friendship' is/should be and what it means to us.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
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An excellent free verse poem. Your comparison of friends you can count on, to a field of blazing scarlet poppies is great, and of course the accompanying pic was spot on. I felt that your words defined what 'friendship' is/should be and what it means to us.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A true meaning of friendship. Indeed bright enough to guide me home. In a few words you brought the true friendship to light and believe me there are so few that fall into that realm
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A true meaning of friendship. Indeed bright enough to guide me home. In a few words you brought the true friendship to light and believe me there are so few that fall into that realm
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Jill,
This is a lovely poem on true friendship. Most of us can count our genuine friends on one hand. The color scheme and graphics are excellent and add to enhance the presentation.
Curtis
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Jill,
This is a lovely poem on true friendship. Most of us can count our genuine friends on one hand. The color scheme and graphics are excellent and add to enhance the presentation.
Curtis
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
