Good Tears
Welcoming tears that do us good51 total reviews
Comment from K.W.
So very lovely- I have chill bumps. Soft and engaging and full of beautiful language and imagery. I really like the idea of stringing them into a necklace- such a gentle appeal to the sends. Excellent. I thank you:) best, k
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So very lovely- I have chill bumps. Soft and engaging and full of beautiful language and imagery. I really like the idea of stringing them into a necklace- such a gentle appeal to the sends. Excellent. I thank you:) best, k
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from God's Writer
What a beautiful poem little one. Good tears are very good, as long as they are for good reasons. I hope they are. Glean from your work and desires the warmth you need on these cold days. I have a strong shoulder if you need to lean on it.
Shalom
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What a beautiful poem little one. Good tears are very good, as long as they are for good reasons. I hope they are. Glean from your work and desires the warmth you need on these cold days. I have a strong shoulder if you need to lean on it.
Shalom
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Black_Oxygen
please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
This poetry transports the reader to a lovely
place. The flow is fluid and it is easy to
read. Thank Your for your creation.
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please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
This poetry transports the reader to a lovely
place. The flow is fluid and it is easy to
read. Thank Your for your creation.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Tina McKala
Sometimes tears heal, sometimes we just must cry.
your poem was so gentle and heartfelt. nice capture of the inner tension.
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Sometimes tears heal, sometimes we just must cry.
your poem was so gentle and heartfelt. nice capture of the inner tension.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Rondeno
Lovely, lovely poem, Jill! It's a very "womanly" distinction, but it's true - women can cry for positive reasons. The poem is attractive, musical and sexy, all at once. Delightful!
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Lovely, lovely poem, Jill! It's a very "womanly" distinction, but it's true - women can cry for positive reasons. The poem is attractive, musical and sexy, all at once. Delightful!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from bhogg
I enjoyed your post. We almost always associate tears with sadness. There certainly are tears associated with mirth, happiness and joy. Unusual structure to your work, but it was a pleasure to read and review. Bill
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I enjoyed your post. We almost always associate tears with sadness. There certainly are tears associated with mirth, happiness and joy. Unusual structure to your work, but it was a pleasure to read and review. Bill
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Dacker
Interesting creative subject. Strong first stanza that sets the tone. Like the imagery of scald...sun-blazed...winged kisses...Pleasant to read...thanks, Dan
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Interesting creative subject. Strong first stanza that sets the tone. Like the imagery of scald...sun-blazed...winged kisses...Pleasant to read...thanks, Dan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from FLutterodt
If I could save these good tears
I would collect them
in my toothbrush glass
like gifts of morning
An interesting poem with imagery, metaphors and carefully selected words to express the heart of the poet. Interesting form. Well done
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If I could save these good tears
I would collect them
in my toothbrush glass
like gifts of morning
An interesting poem with imagery, metaphors and carefully selected words to express the heart of the poet. Interesting form. Well done
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from artemis53
Lovely picture and lovely message. We forget about the tears of joy and I thank you for bringing them to the forefront. Your "winged kisses" was especially precious.
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Lovely picture and lovely message. We forget about the tears of joy and I thank you for bringing them to the forefront. Your "winged kisses" was especially precious.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from nora arjuna
If [i] could save these good tears - thought that should be in cap.
Interesting free verse poem on another dimension to tears. yes, there are happy tears, and even sad tears are best let out.
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If [i] could save these good tears - thought that should be in cap.
Interesting free verse poem on another dimension to tears. yes, there are happy tears, and even sad tears are best let out.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
