Good Tears
Welcoming tears that do us good51 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
I liked the poem, but I struggled through it because of the color scheme. I would consider changing the colors so they are not so abrasive to the eyes. Elizabeth Daniels.
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I liked the poem, but I struggled through it because of the color scheme. I would consider changing the colors so they are not so abrasive to the eyes. Elizabeth Daniels.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Gungalo
ask only that
when you secure this necklace
of tears and opals
at my throat
please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
Yes indeed. Leave a trail of winged kisses that her winter-chilled skin may be warmen. How wonderful this write it.
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ask only that
when you secure this necklace
of tears and opals
at my throat
please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
Yes indeed. Leave a trail of winged kisses that her winter-chilled skin may be warmen. How wonderful this write it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from muezza56
what a beautiful romantic poem! full of lovely positive imagery and the words are strung together like an opal necklace, it was great to read and i especially liked "to leave a trail of winged kisses" wow, really nice
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what a beautiful romantic poem! full of lovely positive imagery and the words are strung together like an opal necklace, it was great to read and i especially liked "to leave a trail of winged kisses" wow, really nice
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Titanx9
I suppose you'd call the tears that spring forth in the throes of joy evidence of extreme happiness. The rhythmic motion of this masterfully written piece ignites the senses with its images. It's a very pleasant read.
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I suppose you'd call the tears that spring forth in the throes of joy evidence of extreme happiness. The rhythmic motion of this masterfully written piece ignites the senses with its images. It's a very pleasant read.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from mystery poet
This is really compelling. Tears usually come
when we are sad or hurting. They are a healing
balm and in that way a God send...The pic is
an interesting choice. I especially enjoyed
the last two lines. Lovely spoken though not
sure of the meaning...Sorry!
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This is really compelling. Tears usually come
when we are sad or hurting. They are a healing
balm and in that way a God send...The pic is
an interesting choice. I especially enjoyed
the last two lines. Lovely spoken though not
sure of the meaning...Sorry!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from terry drake
I have cried tears that left a lump in my throat that was hard to shake the pain and grief that they recognized and escaped my self control. good message.
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I have cried tears that left a lump in my throat that was hard to shake the pain and grief that they recognized and escaped my self control. good message.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from charlyann
Nothing better than good tears, they heal...this was lovely, I liked the style, structure and flow to this, it read very well, nice job
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Nothing better than good tears, they heal...this was lovely, I liked the style, structure and flow to this, it read very well, nice job
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Bobbi22
We often try to hide our tears rather than showing them to others. When we do expose our feelings, getting that kiss of comfort is rewarding. Well written.
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We often try to hide our tears rather than showing them to others. When we do expose our feelings, getting that kiss of comfort is rewarding. Well written.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Doc Holiday
Tears can be most expressive! They can reveal deep sadness, suprise or overwhelming joy. Tears can help cleanse the soul. Your poem speaks of good tears as gems to enjoy.
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Tears can be most expressive! They can reveal deep sadness, suprise or overwhelming joy. Tears can help cleanse the soul. Your poem speaks of good tears as gems to enjoy.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from Treischel
A beautiful free verse poem brimming with vivid visualization of opals and tears. The created mood is sublime. It moves on a structured path as the poem deftly shapes the words with the touch of a skilled craftsman.
Nice alliteration: tears to save and to savor, string them with sun-blazed, and ask.
Please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
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A beautiful free verse poem brimming with vivid visualization of opals and tears. The created mood is sublime. It moves on a structured path as the poem deftly shapes the words with the touch of a skilled craftsman.
Nice alliteration: tears to save and to savor, string them with sun-blazed, and ask.
Please remember
to leave a trail of winged kisses
to warm my winter-chilled skin
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
