Good Tears
Welcoming tears that do us good51 total reviews
Comment from TheWritingType
A beautiful poem with a beautiful picture which really enhances it. the image of catching tears in a toothbrush glass and stringing them into a necklace is absolutely beautiful, it's actually really inspired, it's one of those images that I just now is going to stay with me for ages.
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A beautiful poem with a beautiful picture which really enhances it. the image of catching tears in a toothbrush glass and stringing them into a necklace is absolutely beautiful, it's actually really inspired, it's one of those images that I just now is going to stay with me for ages.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from McMurry903
This is well written and presented perfectly. Interesting thought on good tears, strong imagery and smooth flow made this a pleasure to read. Well done! Brian
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This is well written and presented perfectly. Interesting thought on good tears, strong imagery and smooth flow made this a pleasure to read. Well done! Brian
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from gazzagodbod
i agree fabulous art and your poem is great though i did struggle with the colours probably me tired eyes it is 4am lol loved it my friend xxgazzaxx
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i agree fabulous art and your poem is great though i did struggle with the colours probably me tired eyes it is 4am lol loved it my friend xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
We almost always think of tears in terms of sadness or dispair, so it was especially nice to read a poem about good tears.
A lovely read from start to finish, with some very nice imagery created from your words.
Connie aka bichonfrisegirl
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We almost always think of tears in terms of sadness or dispair, so it was especially nice to read a poem about good tears.
A lovely read from start to finish, with some very nice imagery created from your words.
Connie aka bichonfrisegirl
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from Laureen Bennett
Nicely done free verse poetry entwining tears and a necklace. Very nice thoughts and comparison content written in such a lovely tone. An excellent poem and enlightening message contained within it. Thanks for sharing this!
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Nicely done free verse poetry entwining tears and a necklace. Very nice thoughts and comparison content written in such a lovely tone. An excellent poem and enlightening message contained within it. Thanks for sharing this!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I suppose tears are a lot like rain and cloudy days. All are misjudged as indications of misery--the cause or result of misery. Your poem is very imaginative and powerfully worded. I like it.
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I suppose tears are a lot like rain and cloudy days. All are misjudged as indications of misery--the cause or result of misery. Your poem is very imaginative and powerfully worded. I like it.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from Creative77
What an interesting piece. Your word choices are vivid, and paint a descriptive picture. Everything comes together so nicely. Keep up the good work!
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What an interesting piece. Your word choices are vivid, and paint a descriptive picture. Everything comes together so nicely. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from Curt Mongold
The thought that tears can be a good thing is very nice in this free verse piece. Very nice alliteration in save and savor,and warm and winter.
SOmetimes, tears are a good thing, they are cathartic to the soul.
A pleasure,
Curt
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The thought that tears can be a good thing is very nice in this free verse piece. Very nice alliteration in save and savor,and warm and winter.
SOmetimes, tears are a good thing, they are cathartic to the soul.
A pleasure,
Curt
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
This is a pretty poem, uptown, with so many lovely lines.
However - I have to confess, I almost gave up reading several times, because of the clash of colour - they hurt my eyes and I had to strain to read.
It may be a good idea to change the back ground colour... in the interest of not losing reviews!
Good work.
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This is a pretty poem, uptown, with so many lovely lines.
However - I have to confess, I almost gave up reading several times, because of the clash of colour - they hurt my eyes and I had to strain to read.
It may be a good idea to change the back ground colour... in the interest of not losing reviews!
Good work.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
Comment from David Flynn
Good imagery and word choice here "They do not scald my cheeks nor leave me bereft" A very thoughtful and enticing piece throughtout. thank you for sharing.
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Good imagery and word choice here "They do not scald my cheeks nor leave me bereft" A very thoughtful and enticing piece throughtout. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
