Good Tears
Welcoming tears that do us good51 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
Absolutely beautiful!! A poem which touches one deeply, because it feels like it was written by the hands of an angel. How can one person write something as magical as this? I cannot imagine a necklace as stunning as one made by your tears of joy.
Well done.
You're the brightest star
Nebukadneser
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Absolutely beautiful!! A poem which touches one deeply, because it feels like it was written by the hands of an angel. How can one person write something as magical as this? I cannot imagine a necklace as stunning as one made by your tears of joy.
Well done.
You're the brightest star
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
Comment from litacristallo
Wow, that was as beautiful as the picture and they both complimented each other so well. I love the imagery you brought with the words about your necklace and what it was made of. Very very nice. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Wow, that was as beautiful as the picture and they both complimented each other so well. I love the imagery you brought with the words about your necklace and what it was made of. Very very nice. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
Comment from Poetic Friend
It is good to read about tears of elation, and not sadness. I never thought about reserving such tears, but, mmm, not a bad idea. I love the originality that you took with this poem. The words, "winged kissess" is endearing.
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It is good to read about tears of elation, and not sadness. I never thought about reserving such tears, but, mmm, not a bad idea. I love the originality that you took with this poem. The words, "winged kissess" is endearing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
Comment from EMB
This is a nice poem, and I do agree with the idea of some tears being good tears. Some tears are terrific tears, in fact. I just wish I knew which tears we're talking about. Tears of happiness? Joy? Being proud of someone? Tears of relief? The possibilities are many, but perhaps that was your point. :)
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This is a nice poem, and I do agree with the idea of some tears being good tears. Some tears are terrific tears, in fact. I just wish I knew which tears we're talking about. Tears of happiness? Joy? Being proud of someone? Tears of relief? The possibilities are many, but perhaps that was your point. :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
Comment from Imn2writingstories
Very uniquely done and tears do have so much emotion in our lives and I like that in this poem. The tears are everything and that is really nice to know that crying is okay so don't be shy.
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Very uniquely done and tears do have so much emotion in our lives and I like that in this poem. The tears are everything and that is really nice to know that crying is okay so don't be shy.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from Khione Lock
OH MY GOODNESS! THIS LINE BLEW MY MIND! "String them with sun-blazed fiery opals." My goodness! What a picture that is! So, so beautiful. This was amazing. Excellent job. But the color was a bit too bright for the backdrop, maybe try something that isn't so bright. :D
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OH MY GOODNESS! THIS LINE BLEW MY MIND! "String them with sun-blazed fiery opals." My goodness! What a picture that is! So, so beautiful. This was amazing. Excellent job. But the color was a bit too bright for the backdrop, maybe try something that isn't so bright. :D
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from ZBaron
This was very well-written and the way you structured the poem makes it read with a very even, quick pace. I found it to be very successful, especially the first stanza which reads absolutely beautifully. Very well done.
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This was very well-written and the way you structured the poem makes it read with a very even, quick pace. I found it to be very successful, especially the first stanza which reads absolutely beautifully. Very well done.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Had a very hard time reading due to the color scheme.Sun blazed firey opals and tears. You know I can picture it.Good tears to save. Nice idea
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Had a very hard time reading due to the color scheme.Sun blazed firey opals and tears. You know I can picture it.Good tears to save. Nice idea
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from words
What a lovely, lyrical write full of fresh images.
I especially liked:These are good tears
tears to save and to savor
If I could save these good tears
I would collect them
in my toothbrush glass
like gifts of morning
Hugs, d
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What a lovely, lyrical write full of fresh images.
I especially liked:These are good tears
tears to save and to savor
If I could save these good tears
I would collect them
in my toothbrush glass
like gifts of morning
Hugs, d
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
Comment from dmt1967
The picture and poem go together very well I like the mysterious way this was writing and the way the picture adds to that thank you for sharing
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The picture and poem go together very well I like the mysterious way this was writing and the way the picture adds to that thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
