From Then and there to Here and Now
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Comment from AprilShower
I looked at your one review and this was your answer. "I did not write the article. It is about transcendence. I'm not sure how I will use it yet." If you did not write it, why are you posting it? Your 'Author Notes' make more sense than this article or essay. It attempts to show everyone how intelligent the writer is by using words and thoughts that make no sense at all. It's degrading, because it attempts to make everyone feel like idiots, while trying to show how superior he the writer is.
The rating for this is not rating you, since you did not write it. It is rating the person who thinks he knows everything and is superior to everyone else.
April
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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I looked at your one review and this was your answer. "I did not write the article. It is about transcendence. I'm not sure how I will use it yet." If you did not write it, why are you posting it? Your 'Author Notes' make more sense than this article or essay. It attempts to show everyone how intelligent the writer is by using words and thoughts that make no sense at all. It's degrading, because it attempts to make everyone feel like idiots, while trying to show how superior he the writer is.
The rating for this is not rating you, since you did not write it. It is rating the person who thinks he knows everything and is superior to everyone else.
April
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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I am seeking responses to finally edit my work. You have helped me immensely by reviewing this. Thanks. John
Comment from Kingsland
You put Jefferson into a category here and in your category you say that a person can only be one way. Well I'm here to tell you that is not true. Jefferson owned slaves. What does that say about your strict rules of who and what is what. This is by far the worst article I have read from you. It says a lot of nothing that goes nowhere fast. I had trouble getting through this. The first reason for this is. I don't agree with much of what you put forth in this article. The entire piece is over written and needs to be shortened quite a bit. I did agree with the second and third paragraphs in your notes. But the article is putting people into a box. Saying they can only be a certain way. This is not true in most cases. I am an individual that refuses to be put into a box. Once you think you have me all figured out. I'll deflect any and all of the reasoning that contains your assertions of myself. Boxes are not for me in any way shape or format. I am so sorry to tell you that I did not like this article much at all. It is written well and deserves a five star review. But I do not favor its content... John
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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You put Jefferson into a category here and in your category you say that a person can only be one way. Well I'm here to tell you that is not true. Jefferson owned slaves. What does that say about your strict rules of who and what is what. This is by far the worst article I have read from you. It says a lot of nothing that goes nowhere fast. I had trouble getting through this. The first reason for this is. I don't agree with much of what you put forth in this article. The entire piece is over written and needs to be shortened quite a bit. I did agree with the second and third paragraphs in your notes. But the article is putting people into a box. Saying they can only be a certain way. This is not true in most cases. I am an individual that refuses to be put into a box. Once you think you have me all figured out. I'll deflect any and all of the reasoning that contains your assertions of myself. Boxes are not for me in any way shape or format. I am so sorry to tell you that I did not like this article much at all. It is written well and deserves a five star review. But I do not favor its content... John
Comment Written 30-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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I did not write the article. It is about transcendence. I'm not sure how I will use it yet. Thanks for the bitch slap. John...
