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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Ghostly Winter Ball"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from mystery poet
'The ghostly choir sings' now that so describes
the still silence of the frozen earth up north
where you are. So, that said I should also give
writer praise for the powerful metaphors which
give reader to feel he is at an orchestrated event!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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'The ghostly choir sings' now that so describes
the still silence of the frozen earth up north
where you are. So, that said I should also give
writer praise for the powerful metaphors which
give reader to feel he is at an orchestrated event!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you mystery, it's intermission time.
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Watching football I guess. Well get on
back to it! Watch the diet...
Comment from Robin Gilmor
They really do look like ghosts! A beautiful shot of the ice encased falls.
You must be out and about a lot. This is a lovely verse in rondeau form. Well written with a lovely smooth flow. Quite an enjoyable read. Robin :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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They really do look like ghosts! A beautiful shot of the ice encased falls.
You must be out and about a lot. This is a lovely verse in rondeau form. Well written with a lovely smooth flow. Quite an enjoyable read. Robin :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you Robin. I was out that day. I love winter.
Comment from country ranch writer
The CHARACTERISTICS OF THE ICE FORMATIONS TO RESEMBLE GHOSTS ADDS CHARACTER TO THE FALLS . THE AMPLIFICATION OF THE ECHO CAN BE HEARD FROM A CONSIDERABLE DISTANCE ACROSS THE WATERFALL DOWN ACROSS THE FALLS AND INTO THE ATMOSPHERE.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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The CHARACTERISTICS OF THE ICE FORMATIONS TO RESEMBLE GHOSTS ADDS CHARACTER TO THE FALLS . THE AMPLIFICATION OF THE ECHO CAN BE HEARD FROM A CONSIDERABLE DISTANCE ACROSS THE WATERFALL DOWN ACROSS THE FALLS AND INTO THE ATMOSPHERE.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Wow, thank you so much.
Comment from 3boysmom
Love the picture. It does look like a ghost meeting place. I also loved the poem. It flowed beautifully. My Facebook account was open as I was reading and it annoyed me that someone kept sending me personal messages, causing that pinging sound while I was enjoying your poem. Great poem.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Love the picture. It does look like a ghost meeting place. I also loved the poem. It flowed beautifully. My Facebook account was open as I was reading and it annoyed me that someone kept sending me personal messages, causing that pinging sound while I was enjoying your poem. Great poem.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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I am so please. Thank you.
Comment from judelesemann
This is such a great piece of work! Congrats! It describes so well the image you posted with the poem. It is very lyrical and flows like the waterfall in the picture. Well done. I would like to read more of your work. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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This is such a great piece of work! Congrats! It describes so well the image you posted with the poem. It is very lyrical and flows like the waterfall in the picture. Well done. I would like to read more of your work. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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I am humbled be your review and ranking. Thank you.
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You are welcome. You deserved this ranking. Keep up the good work! I look forward to your next post. Be blessed, Jude
Comment from Zinnia48
I love the way you use rhythm and rhyme to describe such a splendid winter event. I love your whimsy in describing the falls at this time of year. thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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I love the way you use rhythm and rhyme to describe such a splendid winter event. I love your whimsy in describing the falls at this time of year. thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you Caroline
Comment from Gungalo
Wild water really dances while the chorus drawls
To hip hop melody the mad mystro installs.
Just can't stop twinkling toes from tapping on the ground.
Chances advance as spirited devil's play abound.
Moon(+ )glow shines brightly, as a magic mood recalls,
The Ghostly choir sings
You are absolutely right Treischel. They do look like little ghost in there. Beautifully done guy and the write is perfect.
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Wild water really dances while the chorus drawls
To hip hop melody the mad mystro installs.
Just can't stop twinkling toes from tapping on the ground.
Chances advance as spirited devil's play abound.
Moon(+ )glow shines brightly, as a magic mood recalls,
The Ghostly choir sings
You are absolutely right Treischel. They do look like little ghost in there. Beautifully done guy and the write is perfect.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you so, Gungalo.
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