I Can't tolerate that word.
What word would you expunge from your vocabulary?17 total reviews
Comment from charlyann
I'm so glad I read this. I too have rolled my eyes at the word tolerate. I've always thought it had a condescending air of superiority about it. This was great I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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I'm so glad I read this. I too have rolled my eyes at the word tolerate. I've always thought it had a condescending air of superiority about it. This was great I enjoyed it
Comment Written 30-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Thanks for reviewing. That is exactly how I feel, in addition to the reasons metioned.
Comment from gypsycaravan
This whole piece resounds YES. I, too, tolerated spousal abuse. Mostly psychological over physical. Bandaids fix up the latter but still nurse the former from time to time. Your descriptions for the parents saving for bail money is priceless and sooooo true. Great work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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This whole piece resounds YES. I, too, tolerated spousal abuse. Mostly psychological over physical. Bandaids fix up the latter but still nurse the former from time to time. Your descriptions for the parents saving for bail money is priceless and sooooo true. Great work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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Thank for the great review.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Dallas Alice,
I forget what a really fine prose writer you are. this one definitely merits the six they won't let me give you. Your writing is always thoughtful, honest and heartfelt. I liked the creative you approached this by using the word "tolerate" and made a strong point. Really fine writing--Ted
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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Dear Dallas Alice,
I forget what a really fine prose writer you are. this one definitely merits the six they won't let me give you. Your writing is always thoughtful, honest and heartfelt. I liked the creative you approached this by using the word "tolerate" and made a strong point. Really fine writing--Ted
Comment Written 30-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013
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Thanks, Ted. On vac now in Hilton Head. Sister's lap top really sporadic. Behind in everything. Will be catchin up next week.
Comment from Gungalo
In my dictionary, the word tolerate is a rusty old lock that can only be pried open with more constructive words; ones that seek a solution. In some cases patience may apply. Or in others like mine, simply remove it.
That's a good suggestion you make there Dallas and I'm with you. LOL to many times I've heard the word and never the less had to do it.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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In my dictionary, the word tolerate is a rusty old lock that can only be pried open with more constructive words; ones that seek a solution. In some cases patience may apply. Or in others like mine, simply remove it.
That's a good suggestion you make there Dallas and I'm with you. LOL to many times I've heard the word and never the less had to do it.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from MumEsGirl
this was a truly thought provoking work. I can see where you are coming from with this. I can think of many words that should never have found their way into the English language. Many with just four letters.
Well written with a positive feeling throughout
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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this was a truly thought provoking work. I can see where you are coming from with this. I can think of many words that should never have found their way into the English language. Many with just four letters.
Well written with a positive feeling throughout
hugs
kate
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from TheWriteTeach
I want to comment on the most important thing first. It is not easy to liberate oneself from an abusing spouse. I congratulate you for ending your 'tolerance' of the man and the situation.
You wrote a nice piece about a pet peeve. You grabbed my attention immediately and kept it all the way through. We all learned early on in college lit classes that if a theory can be supported with logical evidence then the theory must be considered viable and cannot be dismissed. You did exactly this with the word tolerate. You offered your theory and presented solid, logical evidence in support of that theory; therefore, it must be taken seriously. Nice job.
There were a few problematic areas. You wrote, ". . . it continued as long as I tolerated it: it was easier to put . . . ." The colon should be a semi-colon because you are joining two independent clauses of a compound sentence. The first sentence of the next paragraph also has an incorrect use of a colon. You wrote, "There are some situations where I think the word patience or impatience would be better served: In [in] the office for instance, If [if] I am . . . ." A colon is used to introduce a list but this sentence only has one item (in the office). You started the sentence out saying 'some situations,' which does indicate a list is coming, but only one situation was given - the office.
Overall, you did a nice job.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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I want to comment on the most important thing first. It is not easy to liberate oneself from an abusing spouse. I congratulate you for ending your 'tolerance' of the man and the situation.
You wrote a nice piece about a pet peeve. You grabbed my attention immediately and kept it all the way through. We all learned early on in college lit classes that if a theory can be supported with logical evidence then the theory must be considered viable and cannot be dismissed. You did exactly this with the word tolerate. You offered your theory and presented solid, logical evidence in support of that theory; therefore, it must be taken seriously. Nice job.
There were a few problematic areas. You wrote, ". . . it continued as long as I tolerated it: it was easier to put . . . ." The colon should be a semi-colon because you are joining two independent clauses of a compound sentence. The first sentence of the next paragraph also has an incorrect use of a colon. You wrote, "There are some situations where I think the word patience or impatience would be better served: In [in] the office for instance, If [if] I am . . . ." A colon is used to introduce a list but this sentence only has one item (in the office). You started the sentence out saying 'some situations,' which does indicate a list is coming, but only one situation was given - the office.
Overall, you did a nice job.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the in depth review. Will make corrections when i get home from vacation. Having computer problems whre I am. Appreciate the heads up.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Dallas, you make some really excellent points in this fine essay. Tolerance, to my mind, is quite often an excuse for not wanting to be bothered. I loved the suggestion that parents who tolerate too much had better start a fund for future bail money. And your final two lines are eloquent and wise. Great write, my friend. Hugs, Bev
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Dallas, you make some really excellent points in this fine essay. Tolerance, to my mind, is quite often an excuse for not wanting to be bothered. I loved the suggestion that parents who tolerate too much had better start a fund for future bail money. And your final two lines are eloquent and wise. Great write, my friend. Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thanks, Bev. On vacation now. Time will be limited. Will be back next week.
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Have a great time, Dallas. Seems like the perfect month to get away. Xx Bev
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Alice, a well penned essay and you had me pondering that word "tolerate" for some time after the last line.
Over morning coffee I tend to be leaning your way.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Maureen
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Hi Alice, a well penned essay and you had me pondering that word "tolerate" for some time after the last line.
Over morning coffee I tend to be leaning your way.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Maureen
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thanks, Maureen. On vac this week. Time limited. Will be back next week.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello Dallas01. Interesting idea to rid ourselves of the word, "Tolerate"..hmm..Indeed, "to put up with." To me, the word tolerate does sound a bit totalitarian and harsh. You did good to include the definitions of the word. It would be neat to come up with a new word since language is afterall always evolving. Clearly, you wrote a good piece. good work and cheers.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Hello Dallas01. Interesting idea to rid ourselves of the word, "Tolerate"..hmm..Indeed, "to put up with." To me, the word tolerate does sound a bit totalitarian and harsh. You did good to include the definitions of the word. It would be neat to come up with a new word since language is afterall always evolving. Clearly, you wrote a good piece. good work and cheers.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thanks Benjamin.
Comment from Joan E.
I thoroughly appreciated your premise about expunging a word from our vocabulary. I admired your choice and your argument and particularly your honesty in using yourself as a powerful example. Thank you for your thought-provoking essay and intriguing, conversational style. Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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I thoroughly appreciated your premise about expunging a word from our vocabulary. I admired your choice and your argument and particularly your honesty in using yourself as a powerful example. Thank you for your thought-provoking essay and intriguing, conversational style. Well done! -Joan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thanks, Joan. On vac till next week. Computer not cooperating here.
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I am sorry your computer's on the fritz--I had to replace mine last year. I hope you enjoy your time away. Hugs- Joan
