All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Just for Me"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sharyn,
now this is dedication to the finest in serving love that one can have.
My mouth started watering at the mention of chocolate, now through the scent of flowers into the ring and I'm wondering what a man has to do to get this kind of attention?
I love your cheeky ways and I hope your valentine reciprocates with the same exuberance.
Good luck with this delicious contest.
Kindest mouth watering thoughts.
James xx
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
now this is dedication to the finest in serving love that one can have.
My mouth started watering at the mention of chocolate, now through the scent of flowers into the ring and I'm wondering what a man has to do to get this kind of attention?
I love your cheeky ways and I hope your valentine reciprocates with the same exuberance.
Good luck with this delicious contest.
Kindest mouth watering thoughts.
James xx
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much, James, for your lovely response AND for your just-as-mouth-watering SIX! (see how easy I am to please?)
Blessings and again, I'm delighted that you enjoy my "cheeky ways" - life's far too short to take seriously!
:)Sharyn
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautiful and romantic poem. Lovely to gather all of the ingredients and truly cook from scratch. So much more romantic than buying a box of chocolate.Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
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A beautiful and romantic poem. Lovely to gather all of the ingredients and truly cook from scratch. So much more romantic than buying a box of chocolate.Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much, Debbie! :)D
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
WOW!!! How beautiful it is. You think and write with such clarity and caring; I'd like you to be my valentine. I'm sure my wife would not object because she loves all these thing too.
This is truly a beautiful write. I enjoyed going with you and collecting all this show of love. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the top prize in the contest. Your friend, Bob
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WOW!!! How beautiful it is. You think and write with such clarity and caring; I'd like you to be my valentine. I'm sure my wife would not object because she loves all these thing too.
This is truly a beautiful write. I enjoyed going with you and collecting all this show of love. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the top prize in the contest. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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absolutely! thx so much, Bob - glad you enjoyed! :)S
Comment from MizKat
Sharyn - This is a darling valentine poem. It made me hungry because I like chocolate. I enjoyed this very much and always like your work. Kat
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Sharyn - This is a darling valentine poem. It made me hungry because I like chocolate. I enjoyed this very much and always like your work. Kat
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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Bless you Kat - I don't mind a bit of chocolate myself dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, you win again - lol. Quite the poem, Sharyn - all for a bit of chocolate and some suga', huh? I, for one would rather just go to Laura Secord and buy them, but okay, I'll accept the special ones. (What can I say?)
Very beautiful and tied up with a pretty bow "just for me".
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Okay, you win again - lol. Quite the poem, Sharyn - all for a bit of chocolate and some suga', huh? I, for one would rather just go to Laura Secord and buy them, but okay, I'll accept the special ones. (What can I say?)
Very beautiful and tied up with a pretty bow "just for me".
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do, right? :)))
Comment from Bobbi22
Such a sweet and delicious love poem. You go through a lot of trouble to please your love. Excellent use of alliteration Very well written Valentine's Day poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Such a sweet and delicious love poem. You go through a lot of trouble to please your love. Excellent use of alliteration Very well written Valentine's Day poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much, RP! :)Sharyn
Comment from Doc Holiday
Aww! You'd all of that just for me..you're such a sweetie!
Just thinking about all we'd do for our Valentine's makes me wonder what I need to prepare this year. Thanks for some real good suggestions. LOL!
Nicely done, fun write!
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Aww! You'd all of that just for me..you're such a sweetie!
Just thinking about all we'd do for our Valentine's makes me wonder what I need to prepare this year. Thanks for some real good suggestions. LOL!
Nicely done, fun write!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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all for you, Doc - maybe for the Shady Meadows residents, too - they'll need a pick-me-up after the talent quest! :)Sharyn
Comment from Crystal Carey
LOL I believe you are most definitely right about where Tarzan lives. It is a sweet poem, although I will not be receiving chocolate on Valentines day, well unless I buy them for my self!!
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LOL I believe you are most definitely right about where Tarzan lives. It is a sweet poem, although I will not be receiving chocolate on Valentines day, well unless I buy them for my self!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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Me neither, Crystal - my husband's the chocoholic! :)Sharyn
Comment from David Flynn
This is rich like chocolate "scarlet feathered flowers set a-flame at sunset to lick the sky into pink and glowing submission" and beautiful to behold. Thank you; it is lovely art indeed, that you share with us here.
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This is rich like chocolate "scarlet feathered flowers set a-flame at sunset to lick the sky into pink and glowing submission" and beautiful to behold. Thank you; it is lovely art indeed, that you share with us here.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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aah, glad you liked those lines, David - I did too.
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from L. Sherman
I think this is a wonderful poem and so well done. You're right that the words just sort of glide on the tongue like velvet and linger sweetly. I also like how it's turned around on us at the end - no longer for the narrator's sweetheart, but for the narrator himself. It's a happy Valentine's Day indeed, when both parties win.
You paint stunning pictures and harness such control over your words. It's all to great effect. Very lovely.
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I think this is a wonderful poem and so well done. You're right that the words just sort of glide on the tongue like velvet and linger sweetly. I also like how it's turned around on us at the end - no longer for the narrator's sweetheart, but for the narrator himself. It's a happy Valentine's Day indeed, when both parties win.
You paint stunning pictures and harness such control over your words. It's all to great effect. Very lovely.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thx so much LS. I had fun with this one. :)Sharyn
