All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Just for Me"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Curt Mongold
Wonderful alliteration and really great word use to describe what you would do for your sweetheart for Valentine's day, but the ulterior motive shows up at the end!
Wonderful reading, it was a pleasure,
Curt
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Wonderful alliteration and really great word use to describe what you would do for your sweetheart for Valentine's day, but the ulterior motive shows up at the end!
Wonderful reading, it was a pleasure,
Curt
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Ulterior motive? moi? :)S
Comment from Opal H.
Love it! Romantic and sensual poetry, that's what this is. I think the repitition of the line just for you works really well. And Tarzan in Tarzania - haha that's pretty funny :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Love it! Romantic and sensual poetry, that's what this is. I think the repitition of the line just for you works really well. And Tarzan in Tarzania - haha that's pretty funny :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much, Opal! Well I couldn't put Tarzan in Africa - cacao is native to South America! :))))
Comment from poesyapprentice
As always, you give us the most delightful, fun reads girl. till it begs for laughing mercy had me giggling. I delighted in these lines-- with the most flagrant deep vermilion one-in-a-million fragrances you've ever breathed ... great alliteration throughout. Had a lovely feel good feel right on thru to the end. Very nice!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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As always, you give us the most delightful, fun reads girl. till it begs for laughing mercy had me giggling. I delighted in these lines-- with the most flagrant deep vermilion one-in-a-million fragrances you've ever breathed ... great alliteration throughout. Had a lovely feel good feel right on thru to the end. Very nice!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx poesy - I had fun too! :)S
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Good! It showed ; )
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Good! It showed ; )
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Good! It showed ; )
Comment from God's Writer
I am not female enough to swoon over chocolate. Certain things are grand dipped in the creamy stuff. Delicate parts drenched in its lush brown sweet. Thank you
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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I am not female enough to swoon over chocolate. Certain things are grand dipped in the creamy stuff. Delicate parts drenched in its lush brown sweet. Thank you
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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You just don't know what you're missing out on Erick! :))))
hugs
Sharyn
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I do like certain unusual things dipped in the thick creamy sweet stuff.
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me too, sweetheart, me too! :)
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I think you would like other delectables dipped in chocolate. LOL
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is such a sweet piece of love poetry. You must have been in the Valentine mood when you wrote this. Your choice of words is superb and the alliteration very good. kudos
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This is such a sweet piece of love poetry. You must have been in the Valentine mood when you wrote this. Your choice of words is superb and the alliteration very good. kudos
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much, Perp! From the mistress of alliteration, that's such a lovely compliment! bless you for your magic six!
:)))Sharyn
Comment from Patti R.
Ah!
And I was just lamenting that I had no chocolate tonight!
And here it is,
sumptuous
sensational, Sharyn
You can taste this one, for certain!
The best ka-kow! the sweetest cream, the finest sugar...
The artwork is steamy, why do we do the things we do?
We are carnal and delightful creatures.
Loved it.
Patti
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Ah!
And I was just lamenting that I had no chocolate tonight!
And here it is,
sumptuous
sensational, Sharyn
You can taste this one, for certain!
The best ka-kow! the sweetest cream, the finest sugar...
The artwork is steamy, why do we do the things we do?
We are carnal and delightful creatures.
Loved it.
Patti
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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me too, dammit! I'm GOING FOR IT!!! Bless you, Patti - I was hoping you'd like this one! Thank you for that lovely, lovely, DELICIOUS, sexy chocolate SIX! :)s
Comment from October21
Wow, you're sure making my mouth water with this poetry! (Rummages around in cupboard to find something to eat but cannot match the deliciousness of how you described in the piece) a job well done my friend! You can make a reader see and taste anything!
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Wow, you're sure making my mouth water with this poetry! (Rummages around in cupboard to find something to eat but cannot match the deliciousness of how you described in the piece) a job well done my friend! You can make a reader see and taste anything!
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much, Shenel ... I'm off to cupboard myself now ... he he he! :)
