All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Ode to Me!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Matthew M.
You seem to be a carefree happy soul that is also practical as shown by being a Walmart shopper. I like how this poem addresses all the different senses.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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You seem to be a carefree happy soul that is also practical as shown by being a Walmart shopper. I like how this poem addresses all the different senses.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thx so much MM! :)Sharyn
Comment from Shadow Pahn
I love this.
People should give odes to themselves more often! I personally never miss a shot in mentioning how awesome i am, to either myself OR my wife, who often eyerolls at me in the process!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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I love this.
People should give odes to themselves more often! I personally never miss a shot in mentioning how awesome i am, to either myself OR my wife, who often eyerolls at me in the process!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Well, you'll notice my husband wasn't in this picture, right? :)))))))))))
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'm all out of six stars - so here's a virtual sixth, Sharyn!
gold buttered afternoon/ honeybun-not-a-nun me ..... vintage you and priceless!
This is a real beauty - a worthy candidate for the contest.
And yes, I've had those heavenly, delicious days!!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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I'm all out of six stars - so here's a virtual sixth, Sharyn!
gold buttered afternoon/ honeybun-not-a-nun me ..... vintage you and priceless!
This is a real beauty - a worthy candidate for the contest.
And yes, I've had those heavenly, delicious days!!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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With a name like yours? Of COURSE you have!!! :)Sharyn
Comment from snemes
Love your vivacious, effervescent poem of delight in just being. So rare are these perfect moments, that they must be celebrated. Great vivid descriptions of indulging all the senses. It's like you just woke up and realized that eyes are for seeing, ears are for hearing, tongue is for tasting, and fingers are for touching. Thanks for reminding me of that. Most of the time, it's like there is a disconnect between our minds and our bodies.
I adore the fist-pumping end, especially not-a-nun. Wow, woman! This is the way to live.
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Love your vivacious, effervescent poem of delight in just being. So rare are these perfect moments, that they must be celebrated. Great vivid descriptions of indulging all the senses. It's like you just woke up and realized that eyes are for seeing, ears are for hearing, tongue is for tasting, and fingers are for touching. Thanks for reminding me of that. Most of the time, it's like there is a disconnect between our minds and our bodies.
I adore the fist-pumping end, especially not-a-nun. Wow, woman! This is the way to live.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Well here I am fist-pumping again dear, 'cos you gave me a magic sixer! Yes, I had great fun with this one - amazing what a bit of peace & quiet on a sunny, gorgeous afternoon can do - and yes, too often we don't take the time to'connect' ... but when we do ... AIN'T IT GRAND!!! Big double/ triple heaps of thank you my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Nebukadneser
This is one of those magical poems, which just make you feel good and got out and dance in the rain, even if it is not raining. It is delightful to read, full of fun and makes one feel oh so alive. It takes talent for a poet to awake these feelings in her readers, but you did, me girl
Well done
you're a star
cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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This is one of those magical poems, which just make you feel good and got out and dance in the rain, even if it is not raining. It is delightful to read, full of fun and makes one feel oh so alive. It takes talent for a poet to awake these feelings in her readers, but you did, me girl
Well done
you're a star
cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thx so much Neb!!! :)Sharyn
Comment from Poetic Friend
It was fun and enlightening to read this. Through your eloquent words, I have come to know you better.
We have something in common, I love Earl Grey, too.
Great choice to homage yourself.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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It was fun and enlightening to read this. Through your eloquent words, I have come to know you better.
We have something in common, I love Earl Grey, too.
Great choice to homage yourself.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thx so much, Friend - anyone who's into Earl Grey MUST be good! :)Sharyn
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Such fun! The reader can feel the emotion in this well written work. The twist of the "scales" was both surprising and a delight. The artwork is perfect for this poem. I really liked the greenness of this all! Spring! New beginnings!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Such fun! The reader can feel the emotion in this well written work. The twist of the "scales" was both surprising and a delight. The artwork is perfect for this poem. I really liked the greenness of this all! Spring! New beginnings!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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yeah! thx so much, Ray! :)S
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You are most welcome! MN :)
Comment from kashmayank
good way to celebrate oneself ,I liked the words flow it was smooth and that increased the appeal nice work ,I enjoyed it allm the best
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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good way to celebrate oneself ,I liked the words flow it was smooth and that increased the appeal nice work ,I enjoyed it allm the best
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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thx kash! :)Sharyn
Comment from Janet Foor
This is delightful Sharyn. I loved the line, "I'm celebrating me". A healthily, positive attitude can get us a long way in this life. Sounds like you experience life at the fullest.
Good work
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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This is delightful Sharyn. I loved the line, "I'm celebrating me". A healthily, positive attitude can get us a long way in this life. Sounds like you experience life at the fullest.
Good work
Janet
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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thanks so much Janet! :)Sharyn
Comment from Argentum lupus
Hi there visionary1234
This one was full of so much imagery, taking the reader along with the story.
The wonder of mother nature... fantastic.
Well done
Toli
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Hi there visionary1234
This one was full of so much imagery, taking the reader along with the story.
The wonder of mother nature... fantastic.
Well done
Toli
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thx so much, Toli!
