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Getting A-Head

Lengthy Office Hours Secure His Firm Position...

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Comment from NadineM
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This is quite a funny one! Good 5-7-5 syllable count here. Thanks for the imagery! heehee. Perfectly presented with complimentary colors and centered message below. This made me smile this morning.
Thanks for sharing this with me. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
    Thanks Nadine, your delightful review is most appreciated.
    Cheers P
Comment from Earl of Oxford
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Hi. P

Inuendo overdose in both poem and description,P.

My sorta humour as I once posted a 'viagra' 575.

'hard'-core 'stuff'.
'stretches' the imagination.
You've got some 'balls' posting this,
but I see you're 'up' for it,
so 'come' round anytime.
LOL

Deserves to do extremely well in the contest.

Thanks for the morning fun.

Cheers, Ray

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    LOL Thanks Ray. Yes I have the swingers to match my sense of humour, you know that.
    Say hi to Teddy. *smirk* I need to have a lengthy talk to her.
    LOL
    I appreciate your review, always.
    p
reply by Earl of Oxford on 22-Jan-2013
    Shoosh about Teddy, P.

    Only 2 people apart from me know about her, and I don't want anyone thinking I'm weird. MWAHA! x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Whhooooops!
    Guess it's more like 200 now?
    Or is it 2000?
    Haha
    I'll just keep adding zeros til you weird right out!
    X
reply by Earl of Oxford on 22-Jan-2013
    Hang on - I just checked through my window and saw some guys in white coats, holding giant syringes and strait-jackets, approaching my front door.

    There are also loads of cops present, pointing shotguns and blowing through loud-speakers at me.

    I've decided to hold Teddy as hostage!

    MWAHA! x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Face it babes...she's worn out.
    Who'd want to pay a ransom for her?
    Hmmm...I just wonder.
    Strait jackets you say?
    Yep, you're a nutter.
    LOL
reply by Earl of Oxford on 22-Jan-2013
    This is Teddy speaking.,

    Unfortunately, the Swat Squad stormed the place and blew Ray full of holes.

    Please keep this quiet, as I intend to continue writing under his pen-name.

    x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Don't f*ck with me bitch!
    You'll NEVER be My Lord. You're not a f*cking furry patch on him and anyway, I bet you can't even write a bloody Sonnet you manky mess.
    Top that!
    *smirk*
    RIP Ray...I always loved you, you know.
    *sighhhhhhhhhhh*
    X
reply by Earl of Oxford on 22-Jan-2013
    HAHAHAHAHAHA!

    I'm gunning for you, bitch, as it was you who grassed-up my perfect lover and supreme poet.

    x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Grassed up?
    Arsed up?
    Or just passed up?
    Pity it was YOU he was last up...haha

    See you in the ring bitch.
    But at least we agree he is poetus lordious supremeous...

    Kissy kiss (yeah RIGHT!)
reply by Earl of Oxford on 22-Jan-2013
    LMAO says Ray from the hereafter.

    Teddy is sulking cos you're too friggin clever for her, though she reckons she can stitch HERSELF up.

    Ray says he can't understand how, as he removed her button eyes and tied her paws together in a sexual orgy.

    :-) x
Comment from Galactia
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his job constitutes
a hard day at the office -
Viagra Tester


LOL that is prety good. Loved the satori 3rd line. so funny.

Great job and GL in the contest

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Thanks Tia. I appreciate your review.
    Cheers P
Comment from despiser
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Don't ever have to apologize for your infatuation. It's part of being a Bunny.
Roight?
I firmly believe those are the hard facts and Bunns should accept them Lol.
Isn't this exciting? Haha
Great woik moite

-DEE xx

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    LOL *smirk*
    Not infatuated...Just SORRY for the fellas who need a stack of these blue ones to get it up. Although, this guy is not complaining roite?
    Nup.
    Thanks for a DEElightful review.
    Bunns
    x
Comment from Peter Mansson
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This is creative and very funny from a sick and twisted mind,LOL. Just wondering how one gets ahead, I mean promoted, in this position. Sounds to me like it might take two. Good luck in the contest, you might kneed it to win,LOL.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    LOL thanks for the interesting response. Knew this would make a few stand to attention, run out and buy the newspaper and check out the Jobs Column. Well, a particular JOB.
    I enjoyed your review. Many thanks.
    Cheers P
Comment from Child of the King
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Very very clever and very very funny. I love the 5-7-5 meters. i am wondering how you thought of the theme? A very unusual write. Kudos

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    I thought of the job description after the second line found its way into my head with the implication on "hard"...it all just popped up from there and evolved into ...well - a great job! LOL For him at least. I feel sorry for the wife. I'm sure she has a lot of headaches.
    Thanks for the sixer review and so glad you enjoyed this poem.
    Cheers P
Comment from JWP
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Very very funny, liking the clever play on words in the title and the phrase 'a hard day at the office'. Capitalisation of the job title too is required to signify the title.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Thanks so much. I adore innuendo and use it wherever and whenever possible. Sorry this response was not longer. LOL
    Cheers P
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, closetpoetjestery, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the man who really brings his work home with him, lol. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Aww thanks jaxy. Bet any bloke would love to bring THIS overtime home.
    Not sure wifey is gonna be too impressed.
    I think this would create a lot of headaches...literally and figuritively...heehee
    X
    Cheers P
Comment from Rondeno
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What a great job to have - as long as he can keep it up. Very funny poem, nicely worded. How do they appraise his work? Maybe that's what they mean by "opinion pole".

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    LOL I'm sure with the cache this guy has the wife won't be getting a rest any time soon.
    You're opinion pole gets the nod from me. *smirk*
    Best one I've heard all day.
    Cheers on a corker review.
    P
Comment from Treischel
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A fabulous and humorous 5-7-5 formatted poem about some very wild office antics. Hard day, Viagra, oh my. A cool job, Viagra tester, it really stands out!

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    LOL Thanks so much and glad you enjoyed my twisted sense of hoomer.
    Cheers P