The Human Tape Recorder
He's Only Six but He's...43 total reviews
Comment from despiser
Mommy have to keep her linguistics checked huh?
Fuckin roite moite LOL
Lots of skippery hipety hopety wordplay here. Imagine the little tyke talking like mom writes in the schoolyard?
I can. Girls will adore him and boys will pick on him.
What a bewwy scwewwy world huh Bunns?
Great effort here, 2 in one week?
Hmmmm
Haha
-DEE xx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Mommy have to keep her linguistics checked huh?
Fuckin roite moite LOL
Lots of skippery hipety hopety wordplay here. Imagine the little tyke talking like mom writes in the schoolyard?
I can. Girls will adore him and boys will pick on him.
What a bewwy scwewwy world huh Bunns?
Great effort here, 2 in one week?
Hmmmm
Haha
-DEE xx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL
DEE linguistics huh...? *smirk*
Cute rippety rappy review.
Boys WON'T pick on him or his mother will BASH them. LOL
Yup, the girlies are just gonna love him.
Two WHAT? in one week? *smirk*
Thanks for the DEElightful review...
cpJfB
xo
Comment from gazzagodbod
Lol I know what you mean lol my littke girl was exactly the same though she's 20 now lol sometimes you wish there was a delete button lol great piece xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Lol I know what you mean lol my littke girl was exactly the same though she's 20 now lol sometimes you wish there was a delete button lol great piece xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL thanks gazza.
What? There's NO delete button?
Yikes!! thanks for the heads up
Cheers P
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Comment from Galactia
This is an excellent poem, such a fun read. Your son looks cute. Is that supper imposed or did you actually create that taprecorder box.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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This is an excellent poem, such a fun read. Your son looks cute. Is that supper imposed or did you actually create that taprecorder box.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL No I'm not THAT clever! Haha...I did however have to cut around it free form which isn't easy with a curved line in Paint. LOL
Thanks for a super review.
Cheers P
Comment from cvcopac
Cute, clever, and solid craftsmanship. Reads like a high-ballin' language freight train with a full load of big words. Entire poem with perfect iambs and true trochaic lines, excellent use of repeat lines and rhymes. A handsome young man. A math prodigy, perhaps? K
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Cute, clever, and solid craftsmanship. Reads like a high-ballin' language freight train with a full load of big words. Entire poem with perfect iambs and true trochaic lines, excellent use of repeat lines and rhymes. A handsome young man. A math prodigy, perhaps? K
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Awww K thanks so much, a beaut review my friend and this little man of mine is a definite literary prodegy me thinks.
His memory is unbelievable and it started at 3. He sure as shit does NOT take after me as my affinity is only songwords and lyrics, funnily enough dirty limericks *smirk* and I have the strangest affinity with numbers...I got a poem half done about it but its kinda phenomenal...I seem to be able to remember digits but very little else! Haha
Cheers and thanks for the sixer K-Bomb review.
P
xo
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I had a friend in the service like that. He could add numbers in his head, no matter how many digits or columns, as fast as you,d give'm to him. Extraordinary--genius stuff. Look forward to reading more, P--- Kenny
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Oh no, I can't fucking well add them...just remember them...LMAO
credit card numbers, postcodes, phone, fax, mobile numbers, social security...you name it, if its got a bunch of digits, it photographically embeds itself.
Trouble is like I said, nuthin else does.
Thanks again K
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Well shit, I do that and that's a long long way from genius. I think, maybe, that's borne of desperation.
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
Here's only six but here's...
why...ephin' brilliant!!!!
absolute perfection, dear,
as flawless as the face i peer
off to the right!
-a pure delight
and that is why a six is here!
whoop-whoop! love and hugs,
xxxxx, ephin' ephy.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Here's only six but here's...
why...ephin' brilliant!!!!
absolute perfection, dear,
as flawless as the face i peer
off to the right!
-a pure delight
and that is why a six is here!
whoop-whoop! love and hugs,
xxxxx, ephin' ephy.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Another ephing sixer! Yikes! Better write more shit about the kid! LOL
Thanks for a sterling review, glad you enjoyd me little man's memory antics.
Just gotta watch what I ephing say epher.
Yup.
Cheers and smooshers
P
xoxo
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yerz muchly welcome. x, eph.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, P, and you have a very handsome lad there, though maybe it's best he doesn't wash, as he may go rusty. Very clever techs.
After reading your form explanation notes, I needed a few aspirins, but I think I've now recovered. :-)
Your 2st syllable emphasised trochaic meter is faultless, and the flow perfect.
Brilliant repeat lines and terrific fun rhymes and imaginative word choices throughout.
Blimey, if this bloke's memory can compete with a female (you) then the little guy has a great future. :-)
BRILLIANT entertaining write and worthy of my 'sixer'.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Hi, P, and you have a very handsome lad there, though maybe it's best he doesn't wash, as he may go rusty. Very clever techs.
After reading your form explanation notes, I needed a few aspirins, but I think I've now recovered. :-)
Your 2st syllable emphasised trochaic meter is faultless, and the flow perfect.
Brilliant repeat lines and terrific fun rhymes and imaginative word choices throughout.
Blimey, if this bloke's memory can compete with a female (you) then the little guy has a great future. :-)
BRILLIANT entertaining write and worthy of my 'sixer'.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL I knew the notes would throw a few for a loop.
Crikey early bomb...thanks for the sixer, I know you don't give these out easy. Either that or I'm a fave-rit. LOL Of course, you are not that shallow with your reviews my fine friend.
Yes the little bloke hates to wash, typical male...and his memory stands alone and craps all over mine.
I have an affinity with numbers and song words and funnily enough dirty limericks...There was a young man from Nantucket...whooooops!!!
Nuff said...
If I could give your response a severner I wood.
Lub Pee
XXX
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Comment from barkingdog
This read a mile a minute. It's meter grabbed me and I went with it non-stop.
Wonderful word combinations:
-New-Age Recall Word Technician
Conversational marauder(what a mouthful)
Marvelous alliteration and consonance in this section:
-Dialoguing, his disorder
Recollection, his condition
Rhyme retrieving star awarder (brilliant 'r'consonance!)
Such an entertaining, down-right fun read.
Cutie-pie son.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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This read a mile a minute. It's meter grabbed me and I went with it non-stop.
Wonderful word combinations:
-New-Age Recall Word Technician
Conversational marauder(what a mouthful)
Marvelous alliteration and consonance in this section:
-Dialoguing, his disorder
Recollection, his condition
Rhyme retrieving star awarder (brilliant 'r'consonance!)
Such an entertaining, down-right fun read.
Cutie-pie son.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Haha, thanks for a delightful response to my son's antics.
I had a feeling this might go well with readers.
Plus I didn't swear! LOL
Cheers and thanks so much
P
PS Yep, definite cutie pie...takes after Daddy bear. Awwwwww! X
Comment from McMurry903
I really enjoyed your humorous poem. This is a great form, and you used it beautifully here.I can definitely relate as I have two little ones around the age of yours, and they remember and repeat everything...some good..somethings not so good..LOL. Well written! Brian
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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I really enjoyed your humorous poem. This is a great form, and you used it beautifully here.I can definitely relate as I have two little ones around the age of yours, and they remember and repeat everything...some good..somethings not so good..LOL. Well written! Brian
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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I enjoyed your McResponse...thanks so much and yep he pretty much remembers everything and is also VERY politically correct.
Its hard to believe he is only six at times but this started when he was around 3. LOL
Cheers P
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I loved how you wrote this as if from a computer science perspective- then he gives it the human quality. Great rhymes and a lot of great one words for description. I do love the style as well because it gives it a musical tone. I was like this as a kid, and i am still like this at 43. I really try hard to remember things, but sometimes to mine and others disadvantage. :) Great work! Holly
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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I loved how you wrote this as if from a computer science perspective- then he gives it the human quality. Great rhymes and a lot of great one words for description. I do love the style as well because it gives it a musical tone. I was like this as a kid, and i am still like this at 43. I really try hard to remember things, but sometimes to mine and others disadvantage. :) Great work! Holly
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL Thanks for the sterling review and glad you can relate.
Much appreciated Holly.
Cheers Phillippa
Comment from EMB
LOL Sounds like a kid you really have to watch what you say around. I can only imagine how this cute little "tape recorder" can get adults in trouble from time to time, especially at things like church gatherings.
I enjoyed this piece. :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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LOL Sounds like a kid you really have to watch what you say around. I can only imagine how this cute little "tape recorder" can get adults in trouble from time to time, especially at things like church gatherings.
I enjoyed this piece. :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Indeed he will be one to keep an eye and ear on! LOL
Thanks for a super review.
Cheers P
