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Missed the Monorhyme deadline. Oh, shoot!36 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
I loved! I loved! I loved it! what a absolute hoot of a poem by a crazy old galoot. I laughed from line one till the last line. You're a very talented man with a sharp sense of humor and a sense of adventure. I really enjoyed your poem thoroughly.
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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I loved! I loved! I loved it! what a absolute hoot of a poem by a crazy old galoot. I laughed from line one till the last line. You're a very talented man with a sharp sense of humor and a sense of adventure. I really enjoyed your poem thoroughly.
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Cool bananas? Haven't heard that one for a while - you're showing your age.
Glad you enjoyed my silly rhyme.
Steve
Comment from prayingpoet
Well, too bad you missed the Monorhyme deadline cause this was a "hoot"! Fun to read, great lines and rhymes, and I would like to try:
Each day I'd try a new pursuit:
One day the tango, next the flute
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Well, too bad you missed the Monorhyme deadline cause this was a "hoot"! Fun to read, great lines and rhymes, and I would like to try:
Each day I'd try a new pursuit:
One day the tango, next the flute
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
Steve
Comment from Hollyhock
Such a pity you missed the contest deadline. This is so funny and clever!
I loved the raid on the W.I. and your nerve including the wayward "s" on the nesxt line!
"Does not compute....." - the perfect lead into an excellent closing stanza. Moot or not, the whole thing's "bloody beaut"!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Such a pity you missed the contest deadline. This is so funny and clever!
I loved the raid on the W.I. and your nerve including the wayward "s" on the nesxt line!
"Does not compute....." - the perfect lead into an excellent closing stanza. Moot or not, the whole thing's "bloody beaut"!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thank you.
You should have seen what those old biddies were getting up to in the WI
Steve
Comment from Pili Pubul
This poem is hilarious, it made my day to start with a smile.
Excellent style, very original and a true pleasure to read.
Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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This poem is hilarious, it made my day to start with a smile.
Excellent style, very original and a true pleasure to read.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
Steve
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You are very welcome.
Comment from JM daSilva
Money can certainly make your world go round. It doesn't give you happiness, but sends for it and it comes in a limo. If you cry full of loot, at least you'll be doing it in a luxurious settings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Money can certainly make your world go round. It doesn't give you happiness, but sends for it and it comes in a limo. If you cry full of loot, at least you'll be doing it in a luxurious settings.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thank you
I'd like to at least try to see if happiness comes attached...
Steve
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Well, actually happiness is a matter of how you define the word. I'm always happy even when things are very bad, but my definition is certainly different from most.
Comment from Kingsland
I liked the tongue and cheek of this poem. I'm not sure how the picture relays to the thoughts here, but the poem has some good humor in it and I enjoyed reading and writing this review for it... John
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I liked the tongue and cheek of this poem. I'm not sure how the picture relays to the thoughts here, but the poem has some good humor in it and I enjoyed reading and writing this review for it... John
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks, John.
Bucket list = the list of things you would like to do before you shuffle off this mortal coil...
Steve
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I happen to know what a bucket list is. I just didn't find a correlation to the thoughts in this poem...
Comment from cvcopac
That's clever tucking the plural and excess S at the beginning of the following line--I did that and every other reviewer squawked, "Refute." Shame, shame. Yet...a Clever and well built mono that I thoroughly enjoyed. cvc
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That's clever tucking the plural and excess S at the beginning of the following line--I did that and every other reviewer squawked, "Refute." Shame, shame. Yet...a Clever and well built mono that I thoroughly enjoyed. cvc
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thank you - at least you get that it isn't just a typo!
Steve
Comment from jmdg1954
I'm glad I went for the ride in reading this one.
Very imaginative in the use ofvthevrhumes .
A shame you missed the deadline.
I did the same earlier this week.
John
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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I'm glad I went for the ride in reading this one.
Very imaginative in the use ofvthevrhumes .
A shame you missed the deadline.
I did the same earlier this week.
John
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks, John, glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from 9999pool
By all means a humorous muse of what we can and want to do. Do and say crazy things that we may never get the chance or the courage to do.
A daydreaming muse of the life to have and teh life that existed now.
The mono rhyme is there. And the rhyming words takes us all over the issues and places, LOL.
From parachuting to Women's Institute and over to war torn Beirut and finally the shoot at life for being such a jester, LOL.
Cheers, Ritchiesszzky.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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By all means a humorous muse of what we can and want to do. Do and say crazy things that we may never get the chance or the courage to do.
A daydreaming muse of the life to have and teh life that existed now.
The mono rhyme is there. And the rhyming words takes us all over the issues and places, LOL.
From parachuting to Women's Institute and over to war torn Beirut and finally the shoot at life for being such a jester, LOL.
Cheers, Ritchiesszzky.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
Steve
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Welcome. Cheers, ritchiesszzky.
Comment from Rondeno
This is great fun. Your examples and imagined incidents are brilliantly selected, and you maintain a single rhyme throughout. Very, very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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This is great fun. Your examples and imagined incidents are brilliantly selected, and you maintain a single rhyme throughout. Very, very enjoyable.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
Steve
