Forgotten Thoughts
Sometimes They Come Back103 total reviews
Comment from Jina Sarma
inspired poetry. you are special with your words and thinking power. you have made your ideas work in a perfect way. outstanding effort in creating this poem. keep your journey forward.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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inspired poetry. you are special with your words and thinking power. you have made your ideas work in a perfect way. outstanding effort in creating this poem. keep your journey forward.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much Jina.
The rating and your comments both honor and humble me.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from vickib
Yes you did, (authors notes)
Goodness can you get any more poetic? You know I really like everyday things to use to relate to our lives. Like distant stars and broken jars, tattered threads knotted in fabric and all your great metaphors. But more than that you use them wisely. And then comes emotion as the reader, why I brought my Kleenex. Though I really loved this because it's melancholy sort of a place in between. I'm just guessing like I said I'm an awful reviewer but I know what I like and I like what I know. For the most part anyway.
So great to have you back. Thank you for sharing this Curt.
XO
Vicki
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Yes you did, (authors notes)
Goodness can you get any more poetic? You know I really like everyday things to use to relate to our lives. Like distant stars and broken jars, tattered threads knotted in fabric and all your great metaphors. But more than that you use them wisely. And then comes emotion as the reader, why I brought my Kleenex. Though I really loved this because it's melancholy sort of a place in between. I'm just guessing like I said I'm an awful reviewer but I know what I like and I like what I know. For the most part anyway.
So great to have you back. Thank you for sharing this Curt.
XO
Vicki
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you Vicki,
I am so glad you enjoyed the reading of this piece. I have no answers really as to where or why I write the way I do, it literally just comes to me on its own, if that makes any sense.
No, you are not an awful reviewer in any sense of the word, your thoughts touch me, and I am truly grateful you find pleasure in the reading.
You know me, there will be more forthcoming, as soon as I earn enough from reviewing to post, I don't buy dollars, much to Tom's chagrin I'm sure (smile)
Take care my friend,
Curt
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Hi Curt and welcome back to Fanstory! I see you haven't lost your gift to put your heart into sad but skillfully crafted poetic phrases and metaphors that touch the readers emotions. Wonderful meaningful internal rhymes and consistent rhythm make your poems flow off the tongue. I like how you used the senses of taste and color perceptions to describe your emotions. Superbly written as always. Glad to have you back posting again. I hope you are doing well.
All the best,
Rodger
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Hi Curt and welcome back to Fanstory! I see you haven't lost your gift to put your heart into sad but skillfully crafted poetic phrases and metaphors that touch the readers emotions. Wonderful meaningful internal rhymes and consistent rhythm make your poems flow off the tongue. I like how you used the senses of taste and color perceptions to describe your emotions. Superbly written as always. Glad to have you back posting again. I hope you are doing well.
All the best,
Rodger
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you Rodger.
I am glad to be back after such a long absence. Nice to know you feel I haven't lost my touch too, I was worried about that part.
I am doing well, as well as can be, just dancing in the rain, if you know what I mean.
I am honored my friend, for your thoughts, and for your most humbling rating.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading a thought provoking piece. Your poignant message is skillfully written. Very nice alliteration, consonance and assonance. Vivid imagery throughout.
Good work
Janet :-)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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I enjoyed reading a thought provoking piece. Your poignant message is skillfully written. Very nice alliteration, consonance and assonance. Vivid imagery throughout.
Good work
Janet :-)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much janet, for your thoughts and for your most generous sprinkling of stars.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Gungalo
How proudly they parade in gaudy colors crimson laced
to radiate so fiercely from the fears I haven't faced
they crash as seas of sorrow flood the salty taste of pain
into my mouth as I turn south where nothing left remains
but scattered dusty memories and used up yesterdays
with scars that last from days gone past in hues of blacks and greys.
Oh Curt I think this is the ultimate in writing poetry. You used just about every poetic device in here and yet it does not even sound so. Wonderful.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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How proudly they parade in gaudy colors crimson laced
to radiate so fiercely from the fears I haven't faced
they crash as seas of sorrow flood the salty taste of pain
into my mouth as I turn south where nothing left remains
but scattered dusty memories and used up yesterdays
with scars that last from days gone past in hues of blacks and greys.
Oh Curt I think this is the ultimate in writing poetry. You used just about every poetic device in here and yet it does not even sound so. Wonderful.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you very much! I hoped it wasn't too overboard, sometimes I don't know when to quit. (smile)
I am truly honored by your thoughts, for I think you are a gifted poet.
Sincerely,
Curt
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It wasn't Curt. Thanks so much.
Comment from isurp
Your poem is so pure in form and rhythm and yet so disturbing in the imagery it conveys. I love the line: 'knotted in the fabric of falsehoods I believed.' Very powerful.
Thanks again for inspiring me with one of your works. You are an amazing poet. Write on! -Steve
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Your poem is so pure in form and rhythm and yet so disturbing in the imagery it conveys. I love the line: 'knotted in the fabric of falsehoods I believed.' Very powerful.
Thanks again for inspiring me with one of your works. You are an amazing poet. Write on! -Steve
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you Steve.
To inspire other poets is probably the best rating I could think of as far as compliments go, and your rating is the icing on the comment cake you have given me.
I am honored.
Comment from mystery poet
From that which I read here I surmise that you
refer to the falsehoods of which we learn from
others along the way. Some things one learns
are of opinion and later we find they have caused
us hurt ourselves. I could go on though Let me say
that this is beautifully written with very nice
rhyme and flow...
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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From that which I read here I surmise that you
refer to the falsehoods of which we learn from
others along the way. Some things one learns
are of opinion and later we find they have caused
us hurt ourselves. I could go on though Let me say
that this is beautifully written with very nice
rhyme and flow...
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you, and you are partly right in your summation of the message within the work.
I appreciate your thoughts,
Curt
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My pleasure to read and write review!
Comment from Sally_2013
A truly inspiring poem!!!
The title caught my eye so I decided to read it!!!!!
It grabbed my attention from start to finish and I loved the rhyming scheme!!!
Would definitely recommend it to other readers!!!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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A truly inspiring poem!!!
The title caught my eye so I decided to read it!!!!!
It grabbed my attention from start to finish and I loved the rhyming scheme!!!
Would definitely recommend it to other readers!!!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you Sally,
I really want to say your thoughts are appreciated.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from MaggieB50
This is a wonderful poem. Such a thought provoking message, that one can relate to. Your choice of words here paint a painful picture of how cruel memories cut deep. Good work, and such descriptive word use. Blessings for continued good work. Maggie
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. Such a thought provoking message, that one can relate to. Your choice of words here paint a painful picture of how cruel memories cut deep. Good work, and such descriptive word use. Blessings for continued good work. Maggie
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2013
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Thank you Maggie,
I really appreciate your time in reading this piece and for your generous stars.
Curt
Comment from steevie
Curt, this is really well written. The couplets work so well in the short burst of thought, by rhyming only two lines at a time, leaving off a thought and continuing with a new vein of memory.
I can't help but think that this write is closely connected to another recent write of yours.
well done, Curt
steve
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2013
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Curt, this is really well written. The couplets work so well in the short burst of thought, by rhyming only two lines at a time, leaving off a thought and continuing with a new vein of memory.
I can't help but think that this write is closely connected to another recent write of yours.
well done, Curt
steve
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your appraisal of this piece Steve.
Your observations are astute.
Sincerely,
Curt
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you're welcome, curt
steve
