Forgotten Thoughts
Sometimes They Come Back103 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
The scars of childhood or later in life do come back to haunt if those memories were deeply entrenched in our minds. Abuse, torture and critical mental illness can gripped our lives and throw us mercilessly into the hellish place of self pity and some never came out of it. We can try to forget but it will not go away. And no matter how we tried, it will not go away. So let it stay. But do not let it bother you if you can. Ritchiesszzky.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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The scars of childhood or later in life do come back to haunt if those memories were deeply entrenched in our minds. Abuse, torture and critical mental illness can gripped our lives and throw us mercilessly into the hellish place of self pity and some never came out of it. We can try to forget but it will not go away. And no matter how we tried, it will not go away. So let it stay. But do not let it bother you if you can. Ritchiesszzky.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your insightful review and for your generous rating.
Curt
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Live and let live. Time is short in this world my friend. If those darn memories won't go away, no need to fear because there are people like us who understand exactly how it was like. Take heart that you are not alone in this trap. Be bold and start with forgiveness. Then all else will fall rightly into place for a better tomorrow. Cheers, Ritchie.
Comment from gazzagodbod
love the aa bb rhyme my favourite form and your piece is fabulous love the picture and your poem can only be worthy of a sixer gazza
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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love the aa bb rhyme my favourite form and your piece is fabulous love the picture and your poem can only be worthy of a sixer gazza
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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I am honored by your comments and most generous sprinkling of stars.
Sincerely, Curt
Comment from hopeflys
I really like reading your poem. The words flowed together great and I really enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Hopeflys 0:D i like the pic
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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I really like reading your poem. The words flowed together great and I really enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Hopeflys 0:D i like the pic
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you my friend, for your time, comments and rating of this piece.
Curt
Comment from Peter Mansson
This is exceptional without doubt. The rhythm is excellent and the abundance of alliteration and assonance gives it a rare richness, albeit melancholic. Thanks for sharing such an emotionally moving piece.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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This is exceptional without doubt. The rhythm is excellent and the abundance of alliteration and assonance gives it a rare richness, albeit melancholic. Thanks for sharing such an emotionally moving piece.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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You honor me with your thoughts and with your most generous rating my friend. I am so glad you were moved by my writing.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from justatuna
This is a great write. Excellent. Very intelligent. Flowed very well with a wonderful rhyming pattern. Something I've read several times and will read again. Not only for enjoyment, but to learn. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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This is a great write. Excellent. Very intelligent. Flowed very well with a wonderful rhyming pattern. Something I've read several times and will read again. Not only for enjoyment, but to learn. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank so much for your thoughts and for the reading of this piece. I am glad you enjoyed it and am grateful for your thoughts.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Keri353
Great photo to go with your poem. You have said a lot about the dreams one can have and would rather wake up sooner than later from. And as always, it's a fear of the unknown verses a fear of the known. I am not sure which is worse. Thanks for sharing this poem. Blessings, Keri
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Great photo to go with your poem. You have said a lot about the dreams one can have and would rather wake up sooner than later from. And as always, it's a fear of the unknown verses a fear of the known. I am not sure which is worse. Thanks for sharing this poem. Blessings, Keri
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your thoughts and for your rating my friend.
Sincerely,
Curt
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You are welcome :)
Comment from Laureen Bennett
Your forgotten thoughts that "parade in gaudy colors crimson laced" is wonderfully descriptive of the poem's theme. Your use of internal verse line rhyme sequence scattered throughout adds a multi-layered poetic dimension to this work. A wonderful piece that is written well and a pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Your forgotten thoughts that "parade in gaudy colors crimson laced" is wonderfully descriptive of the poem's theme. Your use of internal verse line rhyme sequence scattered throughout adds a multi-layered poetic dimension to this work. A wonderful piece that is written well and a pleasure to read!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much.
Your thoughts are appreciated.
Curt
Comment from NadineM
This is such a well-written/composed poem about deep pain, flashbacks and memories that haunt. The reader cannot help but want to reach out with love and protect the one whose memories cannot be erased. Though try as anyone may, erasing memories or undoing the damage done by their actual events is impossible. Best anyone can do is listen to the voice which can now be heard. The voice that was silenced through the abuse now has strength because of healing. The person afraid to go to sleep because of recurring nightmares might argue he doesn't feel strong, especially since the painful memories still have such power over him. Strength is evident in the voice heard through your writing and how you're open to sharing. You're helping others as you help yourself. God's healing is evident in your life.
Thank-you for sharing this powerful poem with me. Such sadness here... and such amazing poetry. (hugs xo)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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This is such a well-written/composed poem about deep pain, flashbacks and memories that haunt. The reader cannot help but want to reach out with love and protect the one whose memories cannot be erased. Though try as anyone may, erasing memories or undoing the damage done by their actual events is impossible. Best anyone can do is listen to the voice which can now be heard. The voice that was silenced through the abuse now has strength because of healing. The person afraid to go to sleep because of recurring nightmares might argue he doesn't feel strong, especially since the painful memories still have such power over him. Strength is evident in the voice heard through your writing and how you're open to sharing. You're helping others as you help yourself. God's healing is evident in your life.
Thank-you for sharing this powerful poem with me. Such sadness here... and such amazing poetry. (hugs xo)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you Nadine for your most inspiring comments and for your generous sprinkling of stars.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from DALLAS01
You have employed so many poetic devices here to make this a memorable write. Wonderful imagery and interesting analogies to give your reader a close-up view of what the residue of trauma looks and feels like.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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You have employed so many poetic devices here to make this a memorable write. Wonderful imagery and interesting analogies to give your reader a close-up view of what the residue of trauma looks and feels like.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you my friend. I am honored by your thoughts on this piece and humbled by your gracious rating.
Sincerely,
Curt
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You're welcome.
Comment from Annalise B.
Absolutely beautiful, Curt! I love the whole poem but especially the second stanza, 4th and 5th line from the last.."they crash as seas of sorry flood the salty taste of pain...." very original. This is very well written...wouldn't change a thing and definitely would refer it others! Great job! I'd rate this a 6 stars!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Absolutely beautiful, Curt! I love the whole poem but especially the second stanza, 4th and 5th line from the last.."they crash as seas of sorry flood the salty taste of pain...." very original. This is very well written...wouldn't change a thing and definitely would refer it others! Great job! I'd rate this a 6 stars!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your sincere comments my friend.
I am touched by your thoughts,
Curt
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You're most welcome, Curt!
