Forgotten Thoughts
Sometimes They Come Back103 total reviews
Comment from Amsterdam
Sometimes
Sometimes they come back
Thoughts, of love
Loving lost had
Sometimes
Sometimes they come back
Sometimes Hate fills the land
Sometimes, I should've ran
But that never works
It just comes back again
Nice to meet ya...
am
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Sometimes
Sometimes they come back
Thoughts, of love
Loving lost had
Sometimes
Sometimes they come back
Sometimes Hate fills the land
Sometimes, I should've ran
But that never works
It just comes back again
Nice to meet ya...
am
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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And nice to meet you to my friend. I am honored by your thoughts and most generous rating.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Forgotten Thoughts' is an intriguing piece of poetry. In my opinion it's open to numerous interpretations. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this caliber.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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'Forgotten Thoughts' is an intriguing piece of poetry. In my opinion it's open to numerous interpretations. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Thank you my friend, your comments are always appreciated.
Curt
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Curt, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from rjuselius
as a schizophrenic your words hit the target precisely. memories are rather forgotten than cherished.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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as a schizophrenic your words hit the target precisely. memories are rather forgotten than cherished.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Thank you my friend, I am most honored by your rating, and even more so by your candid comments.
Most sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Aussie
Brilliant story/poem. All your wonderfully descriptive words came together to weave your life story. Whatever you send out into the universe comes back threefold - be it good or bad. We can change things if we try. Happiness is letting go and letting God. Bless you, Kay.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Brilliant story/poem. All your wonderfully descriptive words came together to weave your life story. Whatever you send out into the universe comes back threefold - be it good or bad. We can change things if we try. Happiness is letting go and letting God. Bless you, Kay.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much Kay. Your gift of stars is fantastic, but pales in comparison to your thoughts on this write of mine.
Blessings,
Curt
Comment from McMurry903
Wow, Curt! This is an exceptionally well crafted poem. I read aloud, and absolutely love the powerful tone you conveyed here in this reflective piece. This is brilliant, and Very deserving of the sixer! Brian
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Wow, Curt! This is an exceptionally well crafted poem. I read aloud, and absolutely love the powerful tone you conveyed here in this reflective piece. This is brilliant, and Very deserving of the sixer! Brian
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much Brian.
I am honored and humbled by your thoughts and rating.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Tonulak
This was both technically and emotionally powerful. the internal rhyme and near-rhyme made this lilt like a master poet would. A very fine job--Ted
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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This was both technically and emotionally powerful. the internal rhyme and near-rhyme made this lilt like a master poet would. A very fine job--Ted
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you Ted.
To be compared to a master poet is worth more than any rating you could give me, and I am truly humbled good sir.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from MumEsGirl
Thank you for sharing this well written and heart warming work. You have penned much truth. Some memories never fade, but sadly not all of them are happy.
given the All Time Best, it is obvious that many others can identify with this one.
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you for sharing this well written and heart warming work. You have penned much truth. Some memories never fade, but sadly not all of them are happy.
given the All Time Best, it is obvious that many others can identify with this one.
hugs
kate
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much Kate.
I thought that the All Time Best was given for how many views this piece received, but I'll take it anyway! (smile)
Again, I thank you,
Curt
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The All Time Best is given for the number of reviews received but people don't review poor work
hugs
kate
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Absolutely right on. You wrote this for me. I lost my twin sons and their wives in a car train accident and the memories that surface are soul eaters. the scars are always there and surface when not needed. Read smoothly. Very good
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Absolutely right on. You wrote this for me. I lost my twin sons and their wives in a car train accident and the memories that surface are soul eaters. the scars are always there and surface when not needed. Read smoothly. Very good
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your time and for your review Barb, and let me offer you my condolences on your loss.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Joy Graham
Wow! I am speechless. I am so glad I came to have a looky loo at your work. Your message feels like you know me and the things that come back to haunt me. This is a poem I will come back to time and time again. I love that you used poetic devices. I will have to re-read this poem to find them. My mind is still spinning over your words and message. So many wonderful things to take in here :) I'll be fanning you immediately! Wish I had a six but I'm all out.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Wow! I am speechless. I am so glad I came to have a looky loo at your work. Your message feels like you know me and the things that come back to haunt me. This is a poem I will come back to time and time again. I love that you used poetic devices. I will have to re-read this poem to find them. My mind is still spinning over your words and message. So many wonderful things to take in here :) I'll be fanning you immediately! Wish I had a six but I'm all out.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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No worries my friend, your comments are the six I strive for, and you gave me that in spades. It both warms my heart and saddens me to know you can relate so well to my message.
Thank you once again my poet friend, for your thoughts on this write.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
an excellent write, Curt, that flowed
flawlessly off the tongue. kudos!
'twere indeed a pleasure to read
-and not an accent hiccup in sight! lol.
thank you for sharing.
regards, eph.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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an excellent write, Curt, that flowed
flawlessly off the tongue. kudos!
'twere indeed a pleasure to read
-and not an accent hiccup in sight! lol.
thank you for sharing.
regards, eph.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for the wonderful thoughts my friend!
I am so glad to hear there were no speed bumps in the reading, as I received a recent review complaining of that very thing.
You set my mind at ease once more, no need for the xanax now. (lol)
Thank you once again,
Curt
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lol, you're very welcome, Curt.
regards, eph.
